Give diss book a try cuh ?.
This isn’t a good story, if you’re here for intense battle and intricate tactics you’ll instead find everything bland and basic. This isn’t a war or kingdombuilding story it’s more in the realm of an action flick with moments of romantic comedy.The MC is bland, the character have as much deoth as a sheet of plastic and as interesting as paper.This isn’t worth your time, I’d only read this if I’m critically bored and want to waste away time.
One of the worst novel I have ever read bro my cat can write better than you and the words they are not correct talk less of the way you wrote it
Amazing work! I’ll have to say: amazingly amazing
Nice story line keep up the good work author and I will recommend this to everyone who has been in this category for the next face-slapping chapters.. ??????
its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
look i'm not going to lie, i haven't started reading this yet.i've seen all the positive reviews and my expectations are above average.However before i dive in i just want to get this off my chest... if there's even an inkling of the mc introducing guns i'm out... i'm so F***king tired of novels where the mc solves all confrontational problems with the all mighty gun deciding that it's a smart idea to bring one cluster-f**k of a developmental mistake (just look at America, Iraq and all that) into another world to mass produce. Frankly if i were brought to another world you can be damn well sure that i will be avoiding creating an Earth 2.0 (global warming, terrorism, human related extinction and all that s**t) there is so much we could take to another world that works out better for everyone but it falls back to the same old same old.Anyway i apologise MR Author-san for using your novel as my rant page.i guess you can take away from all this is that i have high hopes for what i'm about to start reading, don't let me down Author.
Chaotic sword wars in one day of the sinful spirit spirit your life god of demon of evil evil father and king of evil father god and father king ?
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I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way
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I hate to say this but this is a fanfic it is almost a copy of a certain other novel on this website slightly different but so far very similar