I don't know why I even bothered reading this... I'll give it 2 stars simply because it wasn't a machine-translated light novel (MTL) and tried to be something, even if it failed miserably. However, I don't even want to call this a novel. It seems like a jumbled collection of thoughts or a dream a One Piece fan once had and wrote down as a draft, but then forgot to expand upon it. Honestly, I don't want to go on a rant about this. I'll just make a few points:
1. This is no better than an MTL (maybe slightly).
2. The entire novel could be condensed into 10 chapters, if even that.
3. My literal feelings can be summed up as: My dudes, what happened? Is this the world of One Piece? Are we sure we read the same manga and watched the same anime?
4. The story (?), if you can call it that, went nowhere. The journey, unique things, creatures, and islands are the point of One Piece, but this is just so one-dimensional.
5. Finally, there wasn't even a proper ending. Honestly, this is just a massive waste of time for both the author and the readers. At the very least, please follow the five stages of a story. Even if it's not all five, there should at least be a rising action and a climax.
I digress. As you can see, there were a lot of questions but no answers. If you must read it—like if you really, really, really have to—just read the first 4-5 chapters and move on. Take my word for it; it's really not worth it.
"This novel ranks among the finest I've had the pleasure of reading. The storyline stands out with its uniqueness, and the main characters, MC and ML, are captivating. The intriguing unanswered questions only serve to heighten my anticipation for the next installment. I'm also quite fond of the third brother, his tsundere personality adds an enjoyable touch. Would you recommend it?"
Where to read ?
Indeed, it's a compelling narrative with a strong protagonist. Although he isn't overly powerful at this stage, witnessing his dominance over weaker opponents and tackling genuine challenges is entertaining. The card system he possesses,虽然赋予了他不少能力，但他的实际训练和巧妙运用使得它并非纯粹的便利。更难得的是，他的背景故事为他提供了一个独特的动机，而非单纯追求最强。
The storyline seems to be veering off into uncharted territory that many other stories, including the original source, only briefly touch upon. I'm eager to see how the author decides to develop this path. Moreover, our main character demonstrates intelligence, not by assuming he knows everything, but by carefully considering situations before acting impulsively. He maintains a level-headed and composed demeanor, which sets him apart from those who act rashly.
"5 Stars!! Absolutely delightful, entertaining, and thrilling to read! Although the story is concise, it concludes on a satisfying note. The chapter lengths are perfect. If you're looking for a captivating tale where male targets regret and plead, this one hits the spot. Remember, these aren't the main love interests; there's only one kind and amiable ML.
This novel somewhat reminds me of 'Seeking Good Temptation,' sharing a similar plot about the FL capturing love interests to reach her goal, but with a darker tone and no ML presence. In this story, the FL aims to maximize affection from all targets to retire from the transmigration agency. She profits from transactions under her name, striving for a lavish seaside villa. The FL's cunning in maximizing wealth while evolving the plot is impressive.
The author does an excellent job of portraying each capture target with distinct personalities, echoing classic melodrama tropes. It's fantastic how the FL exploits their traits to her advantage. I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
However, I must admit that towards the end, the pacing seemed slightly rushed. Some anticipated scenes from the original narrative didn't unfold as described earlier. When their affection levels reached 70-80%, it didn't quite match the FL's earlier plans, leaving me slightly disappointed.
SPOILER ALERT:
Another point of interest is the similarity between the FL and White Moonlight's appearance. While they hint at a possible sister relationship, their backgrounds remain unexplored. I'd love to know more about how one became a renowned actress and the other an orphan. Additionally, the abrupt abandonment of White Moonlight by love interests didn't quite resonate with my expectations. It felt lukewarm in that regard. Despite this, I still adore the story.
Overall, 5 out of 5 stars! I absolutely adored the FL's sharp mind and her quirky obsession with money."
what!
i didnt know there are 700 chaps properly translated
any idea where to find them?
Second reply since the site won't let me edit or reply to my comment 10 days after making it, but the chapters are actually out now.
Try Naruto: wind calamity...
It's well received ig
so was it good cause imma jump in now
waiting for the rep
Rate this novel 1-10
What end? How end? It isn't complete..How can author end it midway like this lightnovelpub editors pleasr contact the author n ask her/him to finish it please..This is not fair to us readers.. At least give an appropriate reason to finish this novel halfway..please reply to this comment ??
This reminds me of otherworldly evil monarch, but between which two is better, I honestly have no answer I can give.