NathanHuyghe
what did you think was gonna happen of course I reviewed my own novel...
The girlfriend (June) is a woman who conveniently managed to be MC's girlfriend and now wants to dominate him... Will the story have a beta MC?Having a girlfriend, made Mc begin to have symptoms of the typical pathetic and virgin Asian protagonist in a harem manga or anime.Author, you're great at writing, but don't make a pathetic, submissive MC who gets on his knees and begs for attention from his cheating girlfriend.€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€Why do asian stories have only 2 types of male leads?Beta "male" protagonist and schizophrenic psychopathic "male" protagonist.
Writer shameless review ???Hi, guys, so, this a dark romance of sorts with a secret baby plot, and I hope you like it.I'll try posting every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday. If you like, try checking my other story, thank you for using your time on this!
read a few chapters and so far the story seems pretty solid, there's room for improvement of course, but it's good for a fresh novel
Dear readers! My author name is ChampionDog, and I specialize in writing fantasy novels, this book is my first serialization on webnovel!I have been writing this book for four months so expect a lot!I hope you will all enjoy it... :)
A very good story, it kept me hooked from beginning to end. I'm addicted to this work
Crime novels are generally very interesting. This one does not lack in the least. The grammar needs a bit of work though. Overall, thumbs up to the author.
This story is amazing would love more chapters please and thank you
The book is great, first chapter got me wanting more although Simon made me sad at first ? then boom! he's in this dangerous world and has changed. Author your grammar is on point, world building is okay . The book has a future. keep it up.
Chapter 5 was aboslute peak. I've never expected for me to get so invested in such a short novel. The only gripe I have about this novel is the lack of new chapters.
LOVE this book. It's AMAZING and so enjoyable to read.The characters are interesting and the story of this post apocalyptic world is great. It has been a while since I've found a webnovel that's thoroughly
First review! Just started reading this recently, the work is still quite new and early but the premise is already quite interesting to be honest. but so far, I've liked what I've seen. I'm leaving this here hoping the author won't drop this work and continue to progress . it's a shame promising works like this don't get enough like light and attention. but keep it up!
