Everything feels too forced and rushed. Too many mistakes in sentences where some words have nothing to do with that sentences which gets really confusing. The logic/reasoning is not throughly thought out because the reasons don’t match with how the author tries to portray the main character. Author needs to worry about quality above quantity because you say one thing which is enough but you want to add more to it which sometimes makes it confusing or unnecessary, there is probably a better way to explain this but not coming to my head right now. The author makes too many side comments as part of the narration of the story which brings down the quality. Also in your narrative you blame characters for their characteristics, which you created, don’t do that........ I have also noticed you try to add to many unnecessary stuff to a sentence and you end up combining two or three thoughts together which don’t make sense...... The biggest problem seems to be structuring the world building/ character building, you mention **** ton of stuff like realms and rare items when people have no idea what they are, I understand you say they are rare but that’s too much for the beginning of the story, it doesn’t help your reads give value to things, what I mean by that is as people read a story they tend to make sense of the world in the story and what has what value, but the way you write it devalues the “super rare items”. Don’t take offense this is a honest review you should try to fix many of these problems if not all, there are other problems but I lost track writing all these. I hope the author improves and fixes his/her previous chapters, I would suggest reading translated novels to get a better idea of how a cultivation novel is structured and there are some top original cultivation novels on this website too.
I'm wondering what happened to this series it used to have a whole lot of chapters, and yet most disappeared, and now only 7 are left please author don't tell me you dropped this series! Right when it was getting really good, too. I'm gonna go cry in a corner and pray that I'm wrong.
The best isekai on ever. Every character is well thought of and the plot is not only funny but can get you really engaged in the story. There is a lot of mystery in the story, plenty of hilarious moments, but i fear the series ending at vol 17 is too quick but who knows, every book has been great.
sorry for the last song but I think its light is 22 and I will 33 it up with the devil in the arms of an assassin and a man who is a coword step away
this!!!!! i really don't know what more to say about this week novel.waste of money. really a very bad story??????????????????????????
Are you fucking kidding me??? Shitty ass god of fishing got picked instead of this! Wtf, stupid ass ****os on this site will take that! Fucking fishing!? Now i have to read mtl which is complete loss of fucking braincells. ????????. FUCK! SHIT STAIN EDITORS CHOICE, I CROSS VIEWED THE FAN SUPPORT AND THIS WAS THE THIRD OR FOURTH HIGHEST ONE THERE, TRASH ASS LYING FUCKS, THIS AIN'T NO DAMN DEMOCRACY, THEY JUST PLAYED WITH MY FUCKING DICK AND THEN TORE IT OFF, YOU STUPID FUCKS DIE.
This is a truly unique novel and as long as the author doesn't give up on the story it may just create a whole new genre of novels that is how good it is.
Man this is so good. Like my heart was gonna jump out at 130 chapter. Damm I was so excited that I didn't see that I have read all the chapter. Man it was so fucking pain full for my heart I just can't imagine. Dude seriously before coming to this novel I was reading one of favourite novel and gave power stones there but if I have more I would have definitely given here. FROM TOMORROW ALL MY POWER STONES ARE WITH YOU
I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author. Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
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This feels like someone translated a chineese book, and swapped all names and places into american. If this book was a person, it would be a chineese tourist in america, carrying an american/chineese dictionary and wearing an I <3 NY t-shirt.
really fast paced beginning, crazy power ups, it seemed interesting......but the MC's shallowness kinda threw me off. And the nonsensical powers are also a let down. No matter how unscientific, if you set it up right it would be acceptable, but the author here does a very poor job of it.