The author's books are good however they do not update chapters often. Which is frustrating to start reading only to not be able to finish.
this is a good book! I love supernatural romance book. It is also completed. Thank you author for writing such book ...
not again!!! please don't bring any harm to baby and June
This narrative is beautifully crafted, and the translator skillfully maintains its essence. It flows seamlessly, as if it were originally penned in English. I cannot praise the translator enough – lots of virtual kisses for them! Take all my gratitude!
Regardless, I adore the plot. The author balances the system with the protagonist and the world effortlessly. Although the system is occasionally overemphasized, this particular story avoids that pitfall. The system's quirky personality adds a delightful freshness, akin to a fangirl for BL, making it easy to empathize with its perspective. I particularly enjoy the "greasy nest" quips, though nonsensical, they've become endearing to me – to the point where I catch myself unintentionally using them in real life, causing confusion. So now, whenever I see a cute couple, I inwardly think, "What a lovely greasy love nest." I hope the system's charm resonates with you too. The system's "golden finger" isn't overly powerful; it mainly provides boosts, not permanent abilities, which often lead to amusing situations.
The story evoked tears at one moment, but mostly, it's filled with laughter. The main character's likability is off the charts, making it clear why the male lead falls for him. He behaves like an adorable puppy, but not in a literal sense. The male lead starts as a relatable figure, being wheelchair-bound, and his character evolves throughout the story without drawing excessive attention to his condition. The author handles this topic sensitively, making it feel like a normal part of the narrative, almost as if they have personal experience. Our affection for the male lead grows as we learn more about him, so I'll leave his personality description there.
In summary, the translation is exceptional, the story captivating, and the characters well-developed. It's truly an outstanding read. I wish the rating were higher, perhaps due to some teenagers seeking instant gratification, but I believe it deserves a higher score. It lacks excessive opulence, slow-burning romance, and multiple love interests, which might not cater to everyone's preferences.
The story desperately requires an editor to trim down the excessive scenes, as only about one in five chapters contains significant plot points. The unnecessary fillers would be tolerable if they were engaging, but unfortunately, they fall flat. The narrative voice is shockingly平淡, lacking any emotional depth, which is killing my interest. A bit more passion or emotion would go a long way.
Moreover, the descriptions are shallow and fail to adequately convey crucial details. The settings are poorly developed, making it difficult to visualize them. The scene transitions are jarring and disrupt the flow, frequently pulling me out of the story. Immersion is next to impossible with the current state of the narrative.
Different baby mamas but he's loyal
I just read the first 2 chapters and I have to say the writing/translation is pretty awful. Is it getting any better anytime soon?
Honestly all the fights from Intermediate mage onwards would be amazing if they were animated by a good studio. I wish someone re-did an anime for it.
1v1 Intermediate fights may not be that great but a lot of that time was spent with the Ancient Capital city and that arc was ? and almost all Advanced and above fights with Mo Fan were just straight up epic. Idk how many times I've wished a studio like Ufotable or MAPPA would pick up this story
Individually, I appreciate this story. It's entertaining, sometimes emotional, sometimes humorous, and the supporting characters, the team members, are intriguing. Don't over-analyze it, and let go of the logic of certain aspects; just enjoy the narrative flow.
In essence, for the protagonist Dugu Zhou, entering the virtual reality MMORPG "Jiu Tian" is a continuation of his first and only life. For player Ye Zhou, it's a rebirth or second chance. Together, they progress through the main storyline, which revolves around their shared past. For Dugu, leveling up in the game represents regaining his cultivation abilities, while for Ye, completing the questline helps recover his lost soul, improving his physical health in the real world.现实中, Ye is severely ill due to the incomplete soul in his current life, necessitating the storyline to reveal their past, clear misunderstandings, confront inner demons, and rectify matters in the original/cultivation realm.
The protagonist is indeed overpowered, leveraging his knowledge of the plot, cultivation skills, and ability to modify game elements. Despite this, it doesn't bother me, as it adds to the enjoyable, stress-relieving aspect of the story. There are numerous humorous moments and thought-provoking scenes.
Some notable aspects include:
1. A willow demon player aiming for the top spot with the highest sin count, a reformed black cat monk, and a lingzhi with a female avatar but a male identity.
2. Ye's money-minded cousin, skilled at amassing wealth and manipulating others, who chooses not to focus on leveling and uses the game to enrich himself, employing the willow demon as a summoned creature.
3. The memorable scene of the white tiger's tooth extraction.
4. The white tiger's protective role during intimate moments for the main couple.
5. The nurse's bewildered response upon witnessing Ye's miraculous recovery after completing the quest and regaining his soul.
6. Ye's father's acceptance of Dugu's existence from another world, his age, and even purchasing the game company.
7. The couple's public Q&A session on the global chat to bypass their silent test due to limited private communication.
8. The dry humor in Dugu's view of evil cultivators as mere resources, and the monks' acceptance of it due to game desensitization. Cultivators from the real world find the players' actions scarier.
9. The curiosity of cultivation world cultivators regarding the game's artifacts, like keyboards, mice, and monitors.
The contrast between real-world cultivators and game-playing players is fascinating, with the former having only one life and the latter able to revive indefinitely. Evil practitioners in the real world are truly wicked, while those in the game maintain a pure heart despite their immoral actions.
Ultimately, the story revolves around Dugu and Ye's love story and Ye's struggle to determine if their feelings are genuine or influenced by the game. In the real world:
- Dugu works as a consultant for the game and practices traditional Chinese medicine.
To sum up, this is a delightful, calming read that deserves more recognition and appreciation. ?
I suppose it's above average, but with a few caveats. The harem aspect isn't particularly engaging, and there's almost no comedic element to speak of. The only reason I'd suggest giving it a read is because the main character's overpowered nature provides a unique and invigorating dynamic.
This particular story progresses rather slowly in terms of romantic development. It seems to primarily center on Ye Fan's professional journey, with sporadic moments of interaction and growing closeness between Ye Fan and Dudu, up until around chapter 310. Despite its pace, I still find it enjoyable.
However, the turning point comes around chapter 315, when a significant revelation occurs... Unfortunately, the translation site has disappeared! I sincerely hope that another translator will take up this story. ?
Thats mtl site right?