Genel olarak anlaşılması ve okunması kolay ancak biraz anlam karmaşıklığı bulunuyor ek olarak yazının konusu çok hızlı değişiyor bir yeri okurkan hemen konu değişiyor örnek olarak canavar öldürürken bir anda simya yapmaya geçmiş oluyor.
Im going to start now, i saw that there's not heavy romance ,so i expect a little... i hope i dont get disappointed T_T . Let's pray to the almighty for good romance
i hope this will get picked already read the 20 chapter and it's good for me . . .
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Interesting plot......??????????????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I hate these types of novels. It’s eastern fantasy but it feels like magical realism. The lack of creativity bothers me. The overuse of cliche situations to make the lead seem cool are annoying. The author is also a convenient writer as i would say, they dont plan out situations that well and add random things later. For example first he tells how the lead kills someone, later when he is in danger he suddenly uses an item the writer never told us about and than he says that the lead picked up the item from the guy he killed. It shows poor writing skills and thats exactly what happens in this book a lot.
Sometimes I imagine these guys go thousands of years without a shower, without brushing their teeth, coming out of a cave and discovering they've forgotten how to speak. That would indeed be a taboo creature.
Just wanted to ask. I hope someone will answer.Only 7 harem memebers right? Or their are still more?Ahhahahsvdgxyauiqiquegdghshajajajajjsjsjsusiakqnw
This story is one of the best I have ever read. Thumbs up to the author, one thing about it is how it was package and deliver I go through it all night.
The ****?The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously.The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.
This story is not for those who enjoy a fast paced, guilty pleasure harem novel, and skip from novel to novel to find anything to gawk at for having a ‘badass, cold and ruthless’ MC, who is just a kid trying to look cool in reality.Translation Quality: 3/5There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, it is fine now, but it is still prevalent in the earlier chapters.Stability of Updates: 5/52 chapters a day since day 1, with not a single minute of delay throughout.Story Development: 5/5Those who enjoy fast-paced novels won’t be a big fan of this. This novel is the most well thought out novel on qidian by a long shot. The author isn’t scared to take his time, and it is AMAZING!!! The MC can’t cultivate at the start, only at chapter 1?? can he do so, but as a fan of cultivation stories, this story has BY FAR THE BEST START OF A NOVEL and IT’S QUALITY DOES THE OPPOSITE OF DECLINING.Character Design: 5/5BEST CHARACTERS ON QIDIAN, you could pick any random character from this story, and make a novel on them that would be a big hit. They all feel so realistic and fleshed out, that you can’t help but wonder in awe in how the author wrote them so well. The MC is amazing, and DESPITE HAVING SUCH DETAILED AND REALISTIC CHARACTERS, YOU STILL FEEL HE IS THE MOST INTERESTING.World Background: 5/5Phenomenal. The world has a clear and rich history better than any other. The history feels like a real history that could happen in our world, except a few people have some small powers. Not much to say, just brilliant.
I won't say it's garbage or anything but it's meh. There is extreme nationalism in this novel but nothing too crazy. the quality of trial novels seems to have gone down this week . Usually there is at least 1-2 or two good books in each batch. They should really consider bringing back some of the past novels. They were ??