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Lovely storey, its original and an anti hero Mc like this is a breath of fresh airThe only bad thing about this story is that there is constant errors in writing such as spelling mistakes or contextual errors (I.e: calling the mc a her or having some parts in French while the rest of the story is in English. Although the language mishaps are extremely rare) but it’s a good novel and I can’t wait for more!
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I read this book around the time when I would never write reviews for stories but looking back this is probably one of the favourite stories I've read on this app. I've always liked stories where the main character develops from either emotionless or straight up ruthless into someone who at the very least is kind to the people who they like. I also liked how everything pretty much tied together once the story reached the prologues time. Cant say that the grammar was always perfect, but I also can't really remember that all too well.
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Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalizedIt's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.
This is definitely a good read. Being pulled into your own novel? now that's some thrilling kick-ass book right here . The character design is stable, and the story development is quite good too. Though the author still needs to work on the writing quality for it is essential , but overall this novel is a hit!
A story involved not just with standard Isekai fare but actually contending and resolving the problems internal and external that the character may have because of their fantastical construction or convoluted relationships. This is explored by being more dark, gluttonous and lustful than some of PancakesWitch's other works and is all the better for it. Just don't expect to stay in one place too long, a time skip will quickly remedy any notion of a modernist daily life story being told.
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This story is horrible. for true readers, who like QUALITY content, don’t come here. there are endless misunderstandings. the FL is constantly talked about as being amazing by the author, but she can’t even protect her brother and is scared about every little thing. ironic things happen every second. she can save hundreds of people a second, but she doesn’t even know if the ML is breathing for a second and “kisses him to give CPR”..she was a great assassin, an amazing spy, but she can’t even control her emotions anywhere this guy is mentioned. constantly saying she doesn’t like him, and does things to prove otherwise. she never out right says things, always lets the misunderstandings continue. annoying, everyone is useless. a weak and dumb mother, a young dumb brother, if they died at least she would be truly heartless and could cruelly take care of ****. the way the “romance” develops is horrible, author just forced them in situations and anything she says is twisted into somehow “I love him sooooo much” ?. women are portrayed to be beneath men and she’s always called a cripple. she can’t do shit, and just going to the capital takes more than 150 chapters, probably more since i’m dropping. the only good part is where she fights the wolves and when she cultivates. wish there was no romance. it’s not even nice to read, just makes me want to punch the author. this story in essence is complete ass. i’m warning you.
Hey dear!! I'm not here to give review, as I haven't started reading it. I will read it when atleast 50 chapters are written and uploaded. Honestly I was really disappointed after you dropped top star . And there are many readers who are also disappointed and it's obvious why they are disappointed. You know, you can always resume that novel. It's not a big deal. As an author, you should take responsibility if it's in your capability....and only if it's in your capability. And its not a big deal even if you don't resume it. Focus on your new story and don't disappoint the new readers.....and yourself. I know it must be bad to see so many negative comments. Don't get discouraged. ?You're Indian author, right? Why don't you right about bollywood? I would really love to read about bollywood superstar and his/her journey. You will get so many good ideas as you know about it more that Chinese entertainment industry. There are so many scandals we are reading about bollywood right now, it's totally worth to become a story. I hope you one day write about it. Good luck with your new story ?
This is a piece of trash.1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend
Finally starting to move! Can't wait to see what the world looks like! I'd love a little more regularity with the updates, but beggars can't be choosers XD
