Colbob:what is it didnt i tell you to not disturb me when i'm teaching duike?
this is honestly one of the greatest Lord novels out there great word building and action too
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keep up the good work! I like the story !
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There are a large number of grammatical errors, the updates seems to be regular but I haven’t been reading long enough to know how stable they are, the story seems a bit repetitive so far with the MC basically just going back and forth between a dungeon and his parents/sibling leaving regularly, there is plenty of information provided about the world so far.. as for character design, he seems to be rather average compared to the extremely stupid or genius MC type, he does what is common sense to most.
i will give myself 5 stars, to increase ratings.... I won't shamelessly say i am doing a best book, its up to you to judge it and rate it...
A sophisticated novel by a sophisticated man for sophisticated gentlemen.Just get past the info dumps, and you'll be surprised by what you find.
amazing, the revenge is the plot so difficult. but you can written this story.. so i will give you big applaus..semangat terus ya kak.. semoga bisa jadi pemenang.
I hope that this story will be picked.
Not a bad story at all. great development and a good pace. Its still in the beginning stages but that's fine. There is a lot of potential to the story.
Your author hereThis story is build on modern day scenario, revolving around the struggle of a fresh graduate to seek justice for his mother while the female lead is rich stubborn heir of the Ling Business Empire, on some crucial point of his struggle, the male lead will found out his true identity...I think this is the only spoiler I can give for now..｡◕‿◕｡