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To start this is not a story for everyone the author is developing the novel with serious themes like problems of fitting into a reality, how people behave and act on it even not liking it and the need for when people should be realistic and when they should put a mask to hide .And a good story and grammar also without much problems . The storyline is geared towards the teen audience but with a lot of drama from what was read our MC male simplifying and a simp has trouble relating to people and therefore hides behind a mask of falsehood and so the story unfolds the female MC and all the inverse of it is open with everyone and a great judge of character knowing when someone is lying or not that causes your problem in the story , relationship between them start because of this pointHonestly and the typical Japanese cliché story with love triangles between characters, annoying dialogues that makes your head hurt, think of it as oregairu only worse, honestly this kind of story is only for people who like this genre if not you will have to put up with a lotDon't be discouraged, author, your story is just not for everyone anyway, keep up your good work
This is not good. I thought this will be a slice of life story but it isnt. Still, the story can be good too but this one is not good. MC is incapable of educating his children properly. When he was going to reprimand hihis children, they start crying and he melted and decided to let them be. Then, the children keep causing trouble after trouble and he will solve it with violence again and again.
The plot is really fascinating and the characters are unusual and interesting. The grammar and writing can be improved, but the overall setting, tone and storyline is engaging and impressive. Good job!
Its peak aot cant compare at all....................................................................................................................................................
I read 150 chapters before finding myself thinking "why am i reading this?"The MC is too overpowered. Everything is too easy for him, no effort whatsoever. It's supposed to be a game but that thing is broken because the MC has an unfair advantage. Maybe it's like Cultivation online and Cultivation is real irl but still. It gets old quick.Characters are bland. We know nothing about them. MC has 3 roommates and aside from "he logged out and went to eat with his roommates" we never see them. No talk about their lives, their game characters, nothing. Author spend more time describing his cultivation system than writing a real story. The game has no quests, you just cultivate non stop. You don't know the structure of the world. You get the names of the MC's city and of the country but that's it. Population? Sects? What's around? We don't know.I don't know where the author wants to go because nothing actually happens. As for other players? I have no proof they exist because MC never saw one. Weird because everyone play the game.
Guys don't spread hatred but see thee efforts the author has put to give the translations a new soul. Don't compare this masterpiece with other shell writers who wrote COTE with no similarity of stories in
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Literally one of the best Omegaverse I read so far ! I’m waiting for the next chapter ?❤️ I have to say that Chester is my favorite character ?❤️❤️ He’s cute, strong ! Thank you for your work author ?
interesting to see the author take the VR angle, I approve.
Definitely a hidden gem. The characters are unique with their own special powers. The story is very comprehensive and the characters are very detailed, so the reader is left wondering about the end of the story. The author is currently editing her story, but I definitely recommend reading it. I'm really curious how it will look when the whole story is complete.
I m not fan of digital content reading but this one has got me. Really appreciate the creator's effort for an engaging sci fi. Would like to have hard copy of it.