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"Typical story so far, the main character (MC) is invincible from the start and all that, but one thing I like is that the MC doesn't try to hide the fact that he's overpowered. Most MCs act like, 'I'm so overpowered that I'll hide my identity for no apparent reason,' which can be annoying. Another thing I appreciate is that the MC doesn't hesitate to state his terms and isn't stupid (at least not as stupid as the MCs in some other novels I've read)."
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So, I picked up this novel because of the author. I’ve been reading her novels lately and got hooked on them. Her style, or what can be deduced from reading a translation, has improved once again.
As she mentioned in her notes, this is her first attempt at a cultivation genre, and she did a fantastic job.
Zanxing, our main character, transmigrated into a book as a minor character destined to die. However, knowing her fate, she decided to change it, along with the endings of other characters in the world.
The character development is excellent, the world-building is solid, the story flows steadily, and the pacing is good.
This novel has all the elements that a hero’s journey should have.
, it was a great read.
As of the time of the comment I am about to read chapter 248.
I have been reading this webnovel for 3 days straight now. And so far so good. It is like reading a Harry Potter book that is written not for kids but for young adults.
(Spoiled alert. Stop here if you don't like spoilers)
I like the fact that the author had created a multi dimensional and interplanetary settings for unlimited story telling in the foreseable future. I am sure this would easily give leeway for him/her/them to expound and develop the characters and thicken the plot.
Humans, elves, dwarves, gnomes, orcs, aliens, spiritual beasts, magical beasts, dragons, magics, runes, heck even laws of physics were mentioned here.
If is not boring. If there is something that I would like the author to touch is his family background, his encounter with the magi that led him to pursue magic and also discuss the life of the previous owner of the lotus. And I am sure one of these topics will easily give us 50-200 chapters.
Yh what Bloooop said, this sh*t fire. In actuality, the VR part ain't like most other novels with it. The real world plot is worth the wait because, well... just read it
Your head, makes my head hurt. Seriously, be more careful with your teeth!
So how is it?Need a review is it worth reading more than 100 chapters
Super necromancer system is a really good one, better then the other two you've read in my opinion, it has romance, but I stopped as it started, they kinda wanted to see how things went and build upon it, I believe sub 200 it started? Enjoy!
If you are interesting in trying this novel here is my opinion.
First off I want to say that the story is complete to include some epilog so you don't have to worry about the story stopping midway. I would say that from chapter 250ish to 300 it starts getting rushed a bit.
The mc is not childish in terms of being oblivious and wierd twords intimate relationships however it isn't a focus due to him being very work oriented.
He isn't a good guy that relies on the power of friendship and doesn't let people live for the sake of it after winning a fight.
There are some wierd plot points that might frustrate you like I was at times but all in all I would say this was an above average read for me.
Yes there is undertones of racism and patriotism that kinda goes hand in hand with any story taking place in Korea for some reason but it isn't a driving force. I think that's about it, have a great day.
Oh and stats are kinda whatever in this. I think they show his stats at the begining only.
I remember this was the first story that got me into web novels to begin with. I remember watching the anime and instantly wanting more so i read the novel but man, i was really hoping for romance at the time.
I remember the author seemed to tease it too, it seemed like there were a few ships but they never sailed. I slowly got bored of the repetition and dropped it. Wasn’t a bad read tho, gotta just try it out and see if you’ll like it, just don’t expect an ounce of romance fr.
It appears that the reader is expressing disappointment with the book they've been reading, stating that nearly 70 chapters have consisted of one-dimensional characters with limited interaction, resulting in a lackluster experience. They had hoped for more substance by this point, but have been let down. The reader questions how such simplistic and one-dimensional storytelling can be classified as josei, which typically refers to works targeting an older female demographic, expecting at least a semblance of depth, even if it's a light-hearted drama or comedy. However, the book has utterly failed to deliver on that promise. The writing seems to lack sophistication, making it seem as though it was penned by someone much younger, around 13 or 14 years old.
It wasn't exceptional, but I managed to finish it. As usual, Chinese historical novels tend to leave a sour aftertaste due to their depictions of pederasty and sexualizing underage characters. It's quite disappointing. Additionally, the female lead's portrayal comes across as cringeworthy. On the surface, she appears cool and powerful, but in reality, she's just another typical teenager with petty behavior.
"Initial review: Zetro's translation quality remains excellent as always. The story is rather absurd, but it's not a terrible novel; in fact, it rarely bores me, possibly because it aligns with my unconventional preferences. I'll revise my rating once the novel progresses further."