A very well-crafted story, which unfolds throughout the plot, is a charismatic protagonist. Over time, this job just gets better!At least until chapter 90, I have nothing to complain about, I hope that the author continues to develop the background world and the mysteries of that world.
At first 5 chapter this novel seem have good future, not bad but atleast have some good point to develop. But after that, i really dont know what the **** with this novel. Like this one doesnt have a focus point to develop the story, it just like blind bull rampaging anything at front. First find the so called space ring with so many book yet after that it done, no more word mention about that. The next arc directly facing barbarian and their ritual, and got ***** after that. Come on, just focus one story before develop another story, it make this novel more like ****eger having chuuni delusion.
Bad Grammar, not to the point of shty Chinese translators (which I would rather read), but nevertheless, bad in a way that doesn't make you choke, but endlessly annoy.The plot seems cool, great even - nice, but the fact that Aaron (The system itself is so... idk)The trope is good, but I think it has bad execution, especially the overly annoying dialogues involved. It makes it feel like, things that are tragic become comedic.The timelines at the start are a bit messed up too. Well, not really, but going back to the forth from past to present just strikes a nerve.I usually stick to, and bear to read even the trashiest of trash plots, but as of the moment, I can't bear this novel.(I can also smell our fellow ph genes)
Thank you for everyone whose reading this book, I hope you`re enjoying it. I just want to give myself a 5 star just to encourage myself to do better haha.
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Fantastic imagination and character designing is on pleasing level..!!All should definitely read this story because it is full of super twists and turns..!! Author should be appreciated for this fine work..!!
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This is Brandon Gould writer of the book Demonsong i am respong to a request for a review. if you review my book. i read all of your book and i enjoyed it. the charters could use some devloping but all in all it was a interesting story and hope to see that review for my book Demonsong
Im give this 5 stars after reading the description
Let's make the first actual review. The story is extremely repetitive and cliche. It's almost identical to countless others cultivation stories. You have the ex-girlfriend betraying him with an arrogant young master, he's treated like trash by everyone, well, you get where this is going... It's not entirely bad, though. Author seems not to be an *******, he might develop this novel in a better way in the upcoming chapters.
Right so I just finished reading the 60th chapter and well one thing for sure this is quite a fun read! Over the top reactions and several jokes here made me laugh and here there are some parts that made the Mc so damn cool like I felt adrenaline just reading it. It’s unique in it’s concept and I like the characters, I feel like the Mc is actually a good person and it’s surprisingly rare to find Mc’s like that. You know most Mc’s these days are cold, calculating or whatever or in Lin Fan’s case too much shamelessness. Really those type of Mc’s for me at least are Mc’s that I hate so much but it’s not a problem here. Fang Ran is cowardly, a little greedy, shameless kinda but when push comes to shove he’ll stand up and do the right thing, he’ll fight and kill for vengeance when someone he barely knows dies, he’ll go help someone despite the danger to himself and he’s honesty just a cool guy. Okay I’m rambling here about his character but really it’s a good read and well I think it deserved a long review to convince some more people to read give it a try. Anyway thanks for reading, I hope you find this novel at least enjoyable