This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .
it's a pretty poor story overall. it has many very lame anime cliches and there's basically no story development. it's a shame because it has so much potential.
Reading through this novel all I can say it has been a wild ride. While reading this I have laughed, I have cried, I have felt angry and happy, this novel is phenomenal. It had the perfect ending, and the story makes the reader experience a myriad of emotions. This is by far the best novel I have ever read. I haven't genuinely cried in years but chapter 1300+ hit me hard. You sir made a great novel. Please continue writing and make more stories like this.
Honestly, way better than expected. I really like how none of the characters feel one dimensional. My favourite thus far is Chu Li. Honestly, her description reminds of Chun Li.
good but longmin great
Your dear author here giving my own perspective. While this is by no means my best work, it is still the most popular one and there must be a reason for that. The reason is...systems. Yeah. I don't know if that's enough for YOU to pick up this book, but I like it anyway, because it also has arson, a psychotic bodybuilder, and freaky aliens. It's funny and adventurous with a side of MC getting a chance with women, and I like that.
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This system type..Good Novel but not suitable for everyoneRead 1st 20 chapter before dropping it..It's fun and enjoyable..
So, this novel are really good. The idea are unique. It is like a rebirth type novel but with Santa on it! Also, the author notes are hilarious. Solid 5* from me
tbh apocalypse isn't my thing, too scary to think what we could face. If I didn't know yang I wouldn't have read it, and I do not regret reading it! One of his best work! Good luck yang!
This novel starts off with a really strong hook and I was hella excited for where i thought it was heading. It seemed like a really interesting new type of management novel with some solid drama and characterization and the MC really came out strong and overcame difficulties to claw his way to a win and set up a path of success. And then everything after that is just effortless and completely overpowered and it turned into just another virtual reality game novel with the 'comedy' largely consisting of "haha wow look at the craaaaaaazy antics these epic memers get up to." The MC is just barely mentioned beyond having a reaction now and again, large sections of the novel now are just interactions between random npcs you don't care about making stale jokes from 10 years ago, there's only a very tenuous connection to internal consistency with how the author vaguely makes excuses why everything he does is absurdly overpowered, actions stop having consequences so its hard to care about any of the characters and you can never feel a sense of crisis...I suppose its still worth reading if you have nothing better to do but with how original the first couple chapters were and how cliche it turned out when the story just stopped focusing on the interesting bits.... It almost seems like they switched authors. Definitely worth a look in the first couple chapters but i wouldn't waste spirit stones on it.
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