The stories progressing slower than I thought but I think it fits with, you know being a monk and all.But the thing that's bothering me is when the Yandere aspect comes in as it's the only tag that made me interested in this but still it's a solid story for now with slow pacing.On top of the slow pacing there is your upload schedule which is pretty spontaneous Pls make a good schedule and put it in the synopsis.The story also seems more on the lighthearted side and I'm just waiting for it to progress further so I'm just gonna stack the chaps for now.
I read it in RAW. And this is one of my favorite novels. very interesting plot, combination of game and reality(maybe with some small errors and plot holes), interesting system of skills. it a pity some strange people who even didnt read the book give it 1 star.And LOL they complain about cliche and "world is quite weird" in the same time!!!I highly recommend this book if you interested in unusual plot and skill system. And parts with comedy is also quite good.(I think real rating must be near 4.6)
the story is good and the pacing is somewhat fast but i can see way too many similarities between overgeared and thisso i am hoping atleast in the upcoming chapters it won't be the same ?
Honestly, I liked the original story more than this changed one, because the MC there suffered more severely which would give him the "desire" to be much powerful after his regression. But it's just my opinion. As for my review, the story is awesome, clear as there weren't much errors grammatically and the author didn't change much from what was written in the original so for the readers who read this in the past, we won't be confused.I'll be waiting for the succeeding chapters and that's the end of my review.
What a nice work you got there... with interesting characters ???I'm gonna follow up to the end of the book. Keep up the good work author...
it was enjoyable in the beginning but as i read on it got to descriptive and the time it spent describing things it could have been in a fight scene.
it's good but it still needs a lot of work. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space.
Legit one of the most interesting stories to have come across this site. 100% money maker here. I want to say take my money, but QI has a bad track record of approving the good novels for some fucking reason.Stats aren't that hard to track.... Clearly this novel is popular already.MC and the world making a interesting premise. It has a little something for everyone, and written well so that everyone can enjoy it.
This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself. The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies Keep Up the Good Work Wild-Bunni
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We need more readers! This novel is the definition of decent and fine writing techniques and skills. Great grammars and not much writing mistakes which is good since many readers are picky about it. The first three chapters goes with the flow like a river and it doesn't start off real rough like other novels. The only problem I may find is the updates but I understand that the writer has their busy schedules and has other first priorities in reality outside of being an author so updates aren't a rush and I appreciate your great effort. Saved to my library! ✔✔