Hey long time no see, you have recommendations?I saw you when you was 17
His interactions with her are kinda strange but at least she's a doll. Not sure if she's "that" kind of doll to him yet though lol
That's not stacking at this point it's just taking a break from it and then never returning or maybe even forgetting that something like this exist
I keep thinking every book of this amazing author is top notch but this truly might be one of my favs!! I love how determined our FL is and she truly is the perfect match for the moody, short tempered ML. Oddly enough though they have had vastly different upbringing their values and work ethics at e the same and they seem to gel so well. I hope their romance will be as sweet and fiery as their personalities??
I've only read two chapters so far. The current cast is certainly colorful. I personally find Vyran to be relatable. They're seeds right now, but I expect my attachments to blossom over the course of the story.
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good grief finally a fanficrion of naruto thats is not 'here i go being op in 3 chapters'
not a lot of them here slow development is not bad the author needs to lay ground base to the story and lay roads for it
thanks for writing this story
This is my opinion if you dont agree just read the Novel.Ive Read 40 chapters so far.In my opinion its not that gd of a story to invest uf time in and definetly not Worth Paying for. the chapters are short abd the story develops slowly. As of the 40 chapters we barely know anything about mc goal apart from there some powerful person or family or organisation that killed his family and he wants revenge. Charcter development kinda sucks if im honest the mc seems shallow abd theres not much too him. Based on those two points i decided to drop it, if it was free It could be seen as a book to get by but i cant see why id invest coins into the book.This is only be opinion, so if you dont like It then read it but i wouldnt recommend.
Stupendo Fantabolous Book! though I have only read 2 chapters till now but I can't help myself from writing a review for this book.I can't describe how amazingly this author has written this book, it has a smooth texture, a smooth flow of read; the plots and scenes are described so precisely using simple words, the characters are shown perfectly. I'm amazed by this author ? loved it and can made into a movie if I would have been a director I would have signed this book to make a movie out of it and it would be super duper hit for sure. Definitely 5 stars.
While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.
Good fanfiction, the author made an original start that i haven't seen in any novel, even if Fang Zheng is rank 5 he is not OP or arrogant and i find it really cool, he is ,always in danger so good read and keep up the good work author.