Great story with solid writing, an intriguing story, amazing description, and interesting characters. I think the writing is solid, with a few minor things that could be changed (some paragraphs should be shortened). This is definitely worth the read for a different type of story to enjoy.
Okay, so where do we start? The characters? The scene-setting? The hooks? I would say this all together. EVERYTHING IS ON THE POINT. The element needed in a thriller is not just a plot. Good writing is what makes a good thriller a good thriller. Author-sama. YOU ROCK. Will keep on reading your book in future.
This was my first dip into writing a full-length story connected by multiple parts, if you like where this one going look forward to sequels from multiple character perspectives.
I love the characters already! You really get inside Zhen's head and immerse yourself in his world while he takes charge of his life. It's a joy to follow and I highly recommend!
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and please write a sequel to this book
okay the main character's name I couldn't actually read that much kept changing every other paragraph between Jake and Leon. the HP made no sense he had zero for a couple system updates for a while and then had 10 out of 100. the exercise routine made zero sense but that wasn't the main issue at one point at the beginning he ran 5 mi in 3 hours that is so slow. I just the random writing errors were driving me nuts. admittedly it's not awful story there's some stuff that just doesn't make sense and add up well but it's not bad I'm just very frustrated.
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I absolutely love this story and highly recommend it. It's one of my top favorites, definitelydefinitelyin the top 3. The main characters are the best!!
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Wow. I was surprised. This novel really help my understanding on my cultivation.I will be braeking through another level.Praise this mortal authors insight and genius.Hope my immortal brothers read this
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