Very good story, the univers is interesting and well written. Hope the novel will continue for a long time.Characters are endearing.The mc is good even if I find it a little too passive at the beginning.But I NEED SOME DUNGEON!!@! PLZZ LET MC CLEAR A LOTSS DUNGEOONNNNSSS!!!(thanks)(?)
it was far better than the ones I have read recently, so it deserves the rating. And update more chapter faster please, can't wait to read.
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The characters are great and the information about what is happening when it comes to what the firefighters are doing is spot on. Continue to give more chapters. Aurora has a interesting life and how she spends it.
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I think the story will become interesting . The way in which the 1 ch describes I think that the story will create more susand thrill . I highly recommend this novel
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I haven’t read but ust the imagination I’ve seen from the synapsis is enough, cheers to the author and keep that wonder I love it!
Im not done reading the 1st chapter when I read that the MC (MC is Main Char right?? Thats what always I think when I see MC) has a duaghter I feel this be a good novel well please keep up the good work..
Please give it a try, this novel definitely deserve your time. This is my first and only review, as this novel is getting really a little attention despite deserving a much better ranking.Though the first few chapters are a bit plain and confusing, it will get better and better after 20+ chapters. Read it, you really won't be disappointed as the writing style is really unique. A sharp, cunning and decisive MC with good character development and some funny moments here and there which you will definitely enjoy. Though the world building is still lacking, I think it will be explained in time as MC's adventure is yet to begin....
For your first work, it was entertaining but it jumped through arcs like crazy. Even so, I really enjoyed it while it last, i hope you improve and keep writing so i can enjoy more of your books.