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The story is good. It is reworking the "Isekai" genre from not falling to one trope; a vengeful hero thrown to the side or a harem, ecchi story while in a world of agony and suffering. Overall, it takes pre-existing concepts and reworks them to fit the overarching theme of the story. Totally not here because a certain someone asked.
I don't exactly see why the reviews made thus far hype this novel up. The writing quality is decent, but I noticed grammatical issues in just about every paragraph. The update stability is, from what I can see, not great. The last chapter released to the public was 11 days ago. Story Development is actually the best part of this novel, I even gave it 4 stars. Put simply, the pacing is good and I enjoyed reading for quite a while. The protagonist is fun, but other characters feel rather robotic. World background is a generic RPG situation, not much to say.Overall MEH. Felt no intensity in intense moments, and can't really relate to any characters.
getting some hot tension between them...
Great novel everyone should read
it's nice, although you know the conversation is a little awkward and all ,but the idea of the tech and wishes is quite interesting , it's just if only there's more chapters .
I only read 3 chapters, not because it was particularly bad but just because a lot of the decisions just weren't my cup of tea due to cliche weapon and gates and dungeons(I'm just not a fan so I won't demerit a novel for it as that wouldn't be fair) , for an authors first time writing a novel the grammar and writing was so incredible I was shocked. the world could have been introduced a bit smoother and more deeply, like sure we now know the bigger world and what's encompassing it, but I would like to see the smaller stuff too like the names of places or descriptions of what he sees around him(basically set up a scenery around them) other than that it's a phenomenal work of art and should be praised
It started good, but it quickly turned bad with that wohle high school stuff. Like seriously why would mc want to go to school.... It make s no sense and that whole part of story feels of and forced. I wanted to give you one star but update frewuncy saved you. Well be warned people, the beginning is great but i quickly turns into a under average cultivation novel with MC dumb as rock.
Very Noice
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
The book starts off a little rough, but by the time you get to the good parts you won’t be able to stop reading. (I read 147 chapters in a single day). The characters are simplistic but grow into their plot requirements very well, the world development is realistic and descriptive. It’s clear a lot of effort has been put into this story, if it’s dropped I’ll cry myself to bed.
That was really good mate! had a bit of fun, looking forward for more, didn't notice a single grammar mistake, could be me skimming through some parts, but aye! thats some'thin good!