-Captain Coco H
while they were lounging in the great hall, Raizel looked towards the shore and said " I sense two that are of my brother's blood, how is this possible Frankenstein"
when he was going downstairs he looked at the dining table that have his wife,son and his son's soon to be wife Lilia surrounding it..
'But...Who would have thought she would start laughing like a maniac after obtaining some few golds... Is the pay at home not good enough?! You practically do nothing at home other than playing pranks on people!'
"Even if other people told me that I was stupid or crazy for liking a girl I just saw for the first time, and had been with for a short time, and even if I did not know whether I will still see that girl or not, I could not help it. It's beyond reason. I chose to listen to my instinct, to what my inner being was telling me."
Whah! This is so out of character for a shy girl like her!
My adrenaline drained instantly and my body went limp to Oneka-senpai's voice.
What? What do you mean?
Here's your revised version with added depth while keeping the dialogue intact:
"What are you doing Xiao Li?" Looking at her with such sly smile.
Entering into a meditative state, he started using his soul force to check his chakra pathways. After a while, he was frowning since he couldn't detect Indra's chakra.
She then let out a reluctant laugh as she began to think about things that most peo— most NORMAL people wouldn't think about.