An average novel, with some mistakes, such as the hero being smarter than all the characters, at least make another character confront him, the positive things are that there is no plot, I hope you develop it
An interesting novel, the character development is good with nice and interesting plot and story line, I highly recommend this novel to read.
It's interesting and I love it, pls author continue your work don't drop this. ?
absolutely love this book so far and cannot wait for more
Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading
I don’t normally write reviews, especially this early into reading (ch30), but this book feels like exactly what I’ve wanted from the rebirth/isekai genre.The fantastic set up, MC, and power system remind me a lot of Soul of Negary at its peak but with a-lot of LotM dna
[Writing quality {4} + Stability of updates {5} + Character design {4.2} ]:- As they say 'consistency is the key' and author is indeed consistent whether it's about writing quality, updates or keeping characters in their distinct but pre-established character (pun intended), he has done it right. Characters have certain depth and you will come to appreciate it as story further progress [Story development {4.2} + World background{4} ]:- As of ch170 you can expect a fleshed out story development and world background. ##Real Rating=4.1*[*=if removed stability of update criteria]Criticisms:- While reading it Author will be able to somewhat convince you it was planned and despite not seeing off camera characters they are vital to story's progression but it's true only for star characters, many others are forgotten like that old pen fallen somewhere behind tabe only to be discovered later for plot. All in all this is a good read and has potentially everything which needed to be an awesome book to recommend. And we can see it's very early in the development of story so hopefully in future it actualize its potential
Seems a good novel, hope you continue it.
Giving a review after a few chapters , I read it and I would say the novel is actually developing nicely .I like the author's writing style. it makes it interesting .
This novel is a grammatical abomination...................................................................................................................................................
Might be good for others if just looking for the lewd stuff & seemed somewhat like could be an ok story, but I found too much repetitiveness in the writing that annoyed me during the first 8 chapters. Plus the character background build of the supposed high intelligence of the MC to not see basic everyday things during the large time skip. Just make the story seem dull.
"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.