This story has been absolutely fantastic so far. I love all the details and explanations that go into the story and technicalities. The writing and translation has been great, although a more thorough editing could have been done as some Chinese lines have been left in. The characters could use more development, but in general I've been enjoying every chapter and can't wait to read more!
This novel is basically what I was hoping Overlord would be: a scheming protagonist who's willing to get his hands dirty in the face of overwhelming odds, with wacky subordinates and extremely dangerous enemies working behind the scenes. He's not a boring invincible hero/villain, his friends and subordinates aren't slavishly loyal to him, and many of the antagonists are quite capable in their own right. Mind, there's a lot more comedy and less dramatic irony, but that really works in this novel's favor. The only real problem is that the chapter organization can be a bit loose, which can make it a little hard to follow during the first 30 or so chapters. Keep with it though, and your in for a real treat.
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I give this 5 stars I usually didn't care about mistakes or grammar error. Once I enjoy reading story it excites me the most. Let's back to the story, traveling time, is like a dream come true if you have something you want to change. You can do it just a snap of your fingers. Even if you make a multiple mistakes you can repeat it again and again and change it until it was perfect. I'm excited to know more about your story keep up the good work author!
The Celestial King is cooking!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its a good start.. I think I'm getting a hang of it now.. A boy lost in anoda body trying yo make everything work out and trying to understand everything.. Nice storyline....love it...keep it up authour..nd more updates pls
This novel is a breath of fresh air after seeing all that harem and hero plot being copy pasted I'm sick of reading same plot everytime this novel is based on realism like when a rational thinker reincarnates in anouther world he will surely take the same path as mc. Few things I don't like is how prideful mc is he will take risk just to kill someone who humiliated him as the saying goes "showing off is a fools idea of glory". What I love alot about this novel aside from evil mc is that the pace is so good it's like reading from a professional author because unlike some others your not sucking your novel dry and the pace remains steady which always keeps us the readers wanting more of it. I recommend this novel to everyone.
Read only 30+, so I don't know what happens in later chapters. Story is very childish. MC acts like he 10~12 yr old. He wants commit suicide because he is evaluated as 'No Seed' without a thought for family or friends. Which is main drawback, as it dampens reader mood and makes them have bad impression for later chapters.
when i first started this i didnt mind the mvp copy thingy but when i got into later parts of the story it gets shorten so much like i just started reading a new chap and it just end and rate at the chapters are getting released i think it should atleast be longer
Shitty. Complete crap.... I wish i could give lesser stars... Just another story with a character who thinks with his lower end. Naive, disgusting and all the more ****
One of the best book u can read if I had a chose I would read it over and over and over again that my opinion and I think it really good so u should total read this book