Elyon has done a great job in describing many of the antics of bored authors as well as the help and support we receive from each other when needed. I love getting the POV chapters since it helps me get to know more about the authors I have met and leave me anxious to meeting those I have not. Thank you for your continued effort and support Elyon! I totally look forward to more updates and more time in the chat. --RedPandaChick
love it!!! more chapters please author! on another note though, I am hoping to see a possible coaching/management dynamic shift for the better in another team with our MC... atm it's only a small complaint. Still, it seems like he's constantly getting the short end of the stick, I only hope that doesn't become a long-term troupe.
Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there
A decent original story. The great is kn pointbeith minimal mistakes. Characters are decently fleshed out. still kinda early to say too much though. MC isn't a virgin beta male who blushes while talking or girls. cant say much for updating stability yet cuz it's too early. world background I'd the in thing I have to criticize. since it's a fituristos setting, I would like better descriptions of the surrounding and whatnot. the author kinda skips that part. otherwise, it's a dope novel.
story is great and interisting but i hope you will get a Editor to make this more easy for the eyes.. ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
I am reader that doesn't have the patience to wait for untranslated chapters of chinese/japanese/korean novel and I already have the ability [Auto-Correct](Max)?? so the writing quality doesn't affect me but I'll still give that part a 1 star. Next is about the smut scenes. I think that you don't need to make it detailed everytime. I think you should make it detailed for the first time of each girls with mc and the next time make it short but not vague (like the first smut scene with his companion). Then, there is the part where mc thinks with his d*ck, I think readers should be prepared for that because the TAG already said it. I also appreciate the fact that this book doesn't have the most cliche plot like nonsense face-slapping. Overall, I like the novel and the MILFS lol.
Does it have fantasy elements ? I mean super powers etc cuz there’s no tag but the names and titles of chapters seem to indicate it
I have really enjoyed reading so far. I love the concept and reasoning behind the characters motivations. However, the Stability of Release is what is giving me issues. A large number of chapters released all at once and then nothing for a couple of weeks.
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Nice work I like it very much.Not much to say but keep on doing the good work. Your current release is very stable. Just wish you could have more views for this original work
Its a low-key MC in style from the sign in novels and since i enjoy these normally i read the mtl up to ch. 60 and then i dropped it.Its not that it is Bad, its just very very slow and too detailed.What i mean with it is that half of the novel is item-descritions from stuff he gets and honestly its get boring to read the 50 description of a item that he will probably never use.Add that to the fact that there are few timeskips and you often feel bored and that nothing had happend.On the Plus side when stuff happens its Actually fine/good just not enough to motivate me, but maybe with Translation its better so when you like sign-in in more Detail then its for you.
Well I don't know it may be that I didn't read it carefully but from the sinopsys he is a 16 year old .and based on the few chapters that I read I think he's retarded completely maybe i didn't read it carefully I'm saying again why ?well it's obviously his behavior