First chapter is good. But second chapter hooks me . It has new premises of cultivation kn earth with its geography . Only three chapters are out and there are already a lot of questions. Which will help to read it for answers
The start was good, and I was enjoying how it was progressing, but all of a sudden, wam bam, now I'm an S rank man with little to no blacksmithing going on. It becomes more of a fighting book rather than a blacksmithing one. I was looking forward to reading about a blacksmith going from F to S gradually, but he goes from F to S in like 20 chapters.The writing could also use some work, as there are occasional gender switches, incorrect math, and somewhat poor Grammer. The worst part, though, is switching from modern language to something from Medieval times, using thee, thou, etc. for no reason.Overall, I'd say it's a 3. If the author had stuck to the blacksmithing portion and not made him OP so fast that it gave me whiplash, then I would've kept reading it.
The author has done an excellent job of describing key details and capturing the protagonist’s struggles. This is a highly engaging and well-crafted work—highly recommended!
great novel till now , will be watching it closely .
Mamat fell silent then the Writerz immediately broke Mamat's silence.
"iya makasih ya Ya atas saranmu"
It was actually pretty clever since even by the end of the day, the rest of the staff didn't think anything was odd. After all, she was just making a few 'slight requests'.
4,
Cultivation Technique:
So much to do, so much to see
So much to do, so much to see
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb