The book is well-written. It's very detailed which makes it easier to imagine what the place in the story looks like and what is happening with the main character. It might be a little bit slow-paced but it's quite acceptable since the story is just starting. Upload more chapters and keep writing.
the writing quality at the first page is not good, though the story line will keep you hooked i hope the author can improve on it.
oh and one thing to learned very late in my 3rd book was that always elaborate on the emotions of the Mc .
Where did you get your pfp I love it
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Courting death? Absolutely. Low key protagonist? Absolutely not. This guy publically goes on rampages and murders every single personbthat offends him. You invited me to your wedding but you didn't toast with me? Die. You attacked my disciple who you didn't know I had? Die. My friend proposed marriage and the city lord's son came to interrupt? Don't need this city around anymore. Die. You broke my car? I'm gonna break your arms and legs and leave you lying on the ground at the scene until repairs are finished. If you move. Die. Chinese protagonists are always at least a bit bloodthirsty but by god this man does not give a sh*t.
Seems to be missing chapters 423-445. The chapter 423 is actually 446. There are also several half missing chapters here and there. I would suggest reading on another site until it is fixed so you don’t miss anything or spoil something.
I loved this book!!
Waste of money rubbish what kind of love story is this
great story!
All tied to the mafia men stories excellent what happened to cole Nero’s son a lot about the little girl.
read the comments section first before going to read the whole freaking story
Nice story, I like it a lot. ...️
I liked the plot and the twists in this story
the author really knows how to capture her readers ?