I found this to be an enjoyable.The mc is a loner and is distrustful at first.But he has his reasons and certain incidents only reinforced this trait of his.Even then he did have some meaningful relationships and now he is coming out his shell and opening unto others.Being able to reach his target and the trials had a great part in it.And his partner helped as well.Honestly,I thought the romance was pretty realistic.They come to care and love each other over time instead of a burning passionate romance.I'm waiting to find out how he confronts his past.I'm also curious about the reason for the reincarnation.The first chapter was one of the weirdest I've seen.I hope I find out soon.
This novel has 1328 something chapters that mean there are only a few more chapters to be translated yet no response from the team of this novel for 1 freaking year!!!! .........how irresponsible guys....have some responsibility and finish the job you have started. PLEASE!!
It's an extremely repetitive onslaught of scheme and 'face slaps', you'll get bored a lot. I only stuck with it because it's the first josei novel I've read.
Again, it's a very repetitive story.
the sudden inability to choose from chinese name or english name plus the author's absurd naming sense are making me confused so badly im rethinking if its worth continuing over the headache.
Please Arthur can you finish the chapters because l can't wait to. see those evil people getting there retribution
I enjoyed reading it.
Why do I think this is an MTL Novel?
I don't know know why the other reviews were like that, but this is how I write a review. An honest and constructive review.
Honestly the first story was compelling and intriguing as well. The background/setting was precisely describe. I could envisioned the exact place as if I was there with Megami.
There are some parts that bothers me though by just reading the piloting chapter/s. First: the proper use of quotation, which I commented at the chapter already. And next was during a dialogue, which I also left a comment there at the chapter.
A little polish will definitely give this book an edge since the story was catching.
Overall smooth reading experience. The premise itself is enticing and even with the few chapters so far it’s been a treat.
the writing quality is a perfection even the grammar the story was unique including the skills he the main character have even the story development is great looking forward for more chapters
>> Read this till 280 chapter. I was really looking forward to this novel. The idea of MC being famous coz of Alchemist profession was great but till Chapter 280 there is not an ounce of alchemy involved (it might be there in later chapters but it would have been better if MC mentioned it in earlier chapters on his plans and all)World building is nice. >> Character development is okay.>> Character growth and connections with others is kinda lame. >> Starting was good and I was really looking forward to it. Later, the story keeps me thinking as if written by some 16 yr old kid.>> @Author Don't get me wrong. I've nothing against you and I would love to see this novel grow more beautifully.I would love to help if you are looking for somebody to proofread.>> I would really like it if we could connect (to bounce some ideas) Pls reply back if u r okay with it and I will send my email.
This is garbage too much why the mc so annoying