Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.
I love the story thus far, I wanteded to know the background of the main character, why he was abandoned and a consistent in flow of chapters! The story is captivating keep it up! Who is the My lady and what does she wany
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Although I have not read it yet but already this book is giving me amazing potential vibes I hope this can get at least 100 chapters author I’m looking forward to it!
Can't wait for the next chapter to release. looking forward to reading more. it is so sad that there is so few chapters right now wish i could read more.
Very well written and even paced. The author knows how to tell a story and keep the reader captivated. I haven't read a book that made me feel what the protagonist feels in years. Love this and would love to buy a physical copy!
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Giving this 1-star just your the fact that it's been 4 months and this novel is still on voting pool and also NO NEW CHAPTERS seriously,I have already repeated this novel twice just so that I can get another chapter.Why are you guys so CRUEL? ??. ???
This is a really great story so far really hope you pick it back up. I will be moving on to the beast master book as well. Stay in good health and good spirits.
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This is a good novel, unfortunately it is one of MAdsnails abandoned (permanent Hiatus) novels that ended in 2012 .-__-........................................