This novel is funny af nd it has a lot cool character in it i love the how he learned his lesson after almost getting killed and then learn how to not be cocky
A ton of grammar mistakes, remember use apostrophe, clause, and etc. Like, the "ill" one instead of "I'll" I could mistaken as ill as in "sick". Please use proper capitalization.
I will start from the beginning :) The cover page is original and catchy (different from what we usually see here)! The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is GREAT! The few chapters I read are interesting, the storyline, characters, description of the background, etc... everything is in right place. You're doing great!
This novel is very interesting, the story are amazing. Love this (づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is interesting so far. The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable. For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels. Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it
Honestly the best novel I’ve read on here, if I’m fair with it chapter 123 is my favourite trust me on this, this novel is a must read for everyone
Petition to ban the auther for giving me brain damage ,and I read till chapter 30,it's brain cancer inducing rubbish heap of a thirsty auther with nothing better to do.
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First 10 chapter is boring af... But after that kinda interesting!! Need more chapter please...Make you feel curiousThe review must 140character idk what to write anymore -,-"
I had to admit that the story was quite strange at the beginning stages, but still. Since the author promised that he will improve, there's no other choice but to trust him since he's the writer, I just want to see the birth of a decent writer, not exactly excellent like Tang Jia San Shao or Er Gen.
plz add these tags so new readers will not get confused: Ruthless Protagonist / Polygamy / Mature / Slaves / R@pe / Demons / Cultivation / Antihero Protagonist / Harem / Male Protagonist