An excellent novel. The Author is an exceptional writer, and this story is a piece of art. The story starts off with character building and a suspenseful plot. The beautiful narrative continues on and builds a fascinating world. The most wonderful aspect of the story is that there is always something new with rich descriptions and vivid imagery. There is a sad undertone to the story, but it definitely helps in highlighting the happy occasions making them more real and easy to connect to. Grammar wise it is almost perfect and possibly one of the best works in WN. I think the most wonderful aspect of this novel is the character building. The MC is just wonderful; he is described very well and the backstories bring life to him making him seem very real. Not only is the MC well described, but so are the side characters. The dialogue between the characters flow smoothly and really highlight their personalities. Reading the story will make you feel that you have been introduced to a diverse cast of characters. Overall, it is a wonderful read and a definite recommendation, the authors, including me, can definitely learn from the meticulous writing and the readers can have a wonderful experience reading this piece of work. Recommendations - for the auxiliary chapter in clarification and explanation, I think you should add "(possible spoilers)" to the title as some extra information is revealed there. My personal opinion is not to leave the great side chapters in the auxiliary section but to add them to the story and just title them side chapter/ side stories.And, of course, it is added to my library to finish reading!
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It was good novel you know new concept etc but it quickly become boring. Because of few things first of all there is racism in this novel(obviously). All the 'criminal origination' and 'kidnapping' is done by foreign people . You can ignore that part but you can't ignore the story development everything is happening around the MC. You would say because he is the mc! right ?No story development is not done around the MC for example A competition is arrange and mc ' chiche ' there that's normal, because mc needs to travel but if mc in two places (Yes just two in whole novel) and everything happens around him. It becomes boring.
It's alright. Slow to start. After it does start, it isn't very interesting. So, not bad, but not something I'll bother reading further.
My main complaint is the writing quality… sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s happening in the story… the author should find someone to edit his chapters as soon as possible… other than that it might be good… though the mc seems a little naive for someone with future knowledge.
Translation is absolutely unacceptable, Horrid, and terrible.
The start is totally confusing. I know that he m did not reincarnate or something but why is that that his knowledge is MORE THAN the rank player claudia. Rank player are experienced player but why is it that he is more than experience than the rank player? also in the summary it is only said that the game only release a bit of information but from the protagonist decision from the start is like know it all and it is like he comes back from the past. I don't know if I understand it right but this is my opinion I will reread again ?.
I am baffled how anyone likes this garbage, the characters are all flat and boring, everyone is stupid, the MCs plot armor is off the charts, he gets exactly what he needs whenever he needs it, no effort, thought or hardwork involved, if you really enjoy this childlike wish fufillment novel, you are the worst.MC: "i need more exp" Author: "Np here's a monster tide"
Very unique story, I would like to see more of this incredible piece. By far the best story of the lot with the addition of being unique even in all webnovel.
Author here. As this is just the beginning wanted to give you guys a heads up. This novel is going to be a Harem novel with some mature content. So those who have Harem or have suggestions about it, I'll hear them in comments. Back to the story, as you can already guess this story take place in Martial world with clans, empires, etc. There are many legacies in this world left behind by some of the strongest cultivator and even of some unknown. Our Mc recieve the inheritance of Demon God, also known as Death god . There are many mysteries regarding this legacy, it's secrets and how it ended up on mc's planet. But that will be disclosed at the right time. There is many good things to come. So stay with me and if possible add to your reading list. I'll try not to disappoint you. If you have suggestions or some ideas about the story I'll hear them and possibly include in the story. And a Biiiig thanks to everyone reading.
this seems really interesting!! hoping for it picked !! ...........................................
It's ok to read. It's just not as great as many others in my list. I would still recommend it though. They should work more on the characters development of side characters