I only read until chapter 20, boring that's all I can say, the plot follows the same plot as the comic. MC didn't do much change like when there was dialogue he didn't even take the initiative to speak just kept quiet and thought in his mind even when Tang San asked Yu Xiaogang to be his teacher MC just followed Tang san and I stopped reading there, I think the MC is really just a side character who followed Tang San like a chick. I'm just summarizing what I read, maybe some of you have read up to 20+ chapters, if so can you summarize the progress.
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Hello! I only read up to chapter 5, but I can see the author's hard work.The first chapter is so detailed describing the characters and the situation, but it's a bit of info dump in it. I think some information could be told in the next chapters gradually to give it a more surprising element.The author beautifully described the events in the story. It's so majestic that I really enjoy every description.The dialogues went smoothly. It's not awkward and stiff. That's really good.Each chapter is quite long, but it's not boring. It's interesting and makes me want to read more.The pace is just right. There's a 'seven months later' jumping in the fifth chapter, but it doesn't feel rush. I can still enjoy the development.Overall, this book has a lot of potentials. I hope this book will shine in the future ?
Interesting... Seems like some interstellar Sci-fi novel with a touch of Xianxia. The quality of writing is improving as the story progresses further. The story has potential and can retain the readers. the main character so far is likable and I hope it stays like that. A good story so far... I can definitely see the author has cooked up something interesting. A great read!!
Jajaj funny he was training to be the heir of his family since he was 2 years old, has killed people but he's too ? silly dealing with women.... God his grandfather teachings were for nothing ?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️
What do you call this new weak form of plot: urban accident? Finally, the biggest flaw is in the mixed plot of fragile pieces from other visual media to the textual one. "Final destination" for example. Without adding a good script. It is possible to improve but would have to add more density to the characters, some risk or objective to be achieved. The problem with this spectacular work of death is purely visual, smaller events that generate a bigger accident are not even necessary for the plot. After all, one minor incident is enough to kill, millions choke to death eating or sleeping, a trip to the isolated and locked bathroom and you can slip and fracture something in moments, suffocate with gas leaking in the apartment, not to mention that you can catch tetanus doing the beard, stepping into the empty elevator shaft while looking at the cell phone, not to mention the growing number of people who die after the cell phone burns down in bed while charging. The fact that we reach billions of humans does not make some human death a important ceremony for the universe to need to conspire.
Story was great till around chapter 120. the author looks to have changed or decided that the characters dEvelopment and relationships that formed previously, didn’t mean anything; e.g the 2 girls that were treated as part of his “family” or his assistants/maids, suddenly became outsiders that had no relationship with him whatsoever, other than as aquaintences. His personality and how he treated cultivators changed noticeably. Seems like they got someone to continue the story for the pay from Webnovel.
Serious deja vu rn. synopsis is just library of heavens path. i might never get back the emotion i felt reading that, but hopefully this will give me something similar
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this is the first time I read sport novel and I didn't expect it, it was so good, hope author upload 7 chapters a week, except that everything is good
Ok here's my actual review In terms of the grammar and English it's quite good I didn't really see any spelling mistakes or confusing sentences so yeahThe characters have depth to them with each of them having a interesting personality, background, and interaction to each other.The updates are honestly quite good sometimes you get 2 chapters in a day and I'm here for itThis is honestly quite a good novel even if did not involved a yandere the mystery and how characters interact with one another is honestly quite good to me So yeah I recommend you read it
The characters are boring and bland. The mc instead of leaving group chats or blocking people is legit acting like a masochist and just taking the insults. The FL isn’t bad but not really good either. Overall novel is bland and uninteresting