Why even bothering to translate this? There are 3145 Chapters in raw right now (still ongoing). If this gets picked up in the distant future there will be probably 3200+ Chapters, which means with approximately 2 chapters per day, this will take over 4 years to even reach the point where it is right now in COO...About the novel:The translation quality is good, but there no point going over all the points like story, characters and world background. It's the typical reincarnation dude, ignorant and dumb young masters (you can expect face slapping) and the same 'early procedure' as always (op technique, auction, selling some elixiers/pills (or whatever) and so on. Only bother reading if there is nothing else. lol.
Amazing Novel ........................................................When I read the novel, I don't know what I'm reading. I don't understand what author writing.
Looks interesting, mc transmigrates into a female body, nothing noteworthy yet but a lot of potential, the updates are very very slow, at least the author should mention how many chapters per week. Will update the review after reading more chapters
Way different from the typical system/game element novels. Has a thriller element that makes it very interesting and exciting. The Mc is also very cautious and not op. Basically a very refreshing story if you’re looking for a change.
Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
Writing Quality : Good englishStability of Updates : It's free 5 star 'cause i don't care about stability bs Story Development : i drop at chap 111 i won't spoil but you **** your story like all the character development you did on Rezar seem to be useless....Character Design : Most character apart from priest seem robotic and are pretty bad like the so-called princess acting all important while she clearly overstep her postion a lot ( chap 111 i just want to smash her ) World Background : Pretty innovative and cool Anyway i drop i really like the idea but you make it seem so bad with how the story happen and the character any way good luck and it wasn't for the world background and the the free 5 star the story would be pretty much only value 3.5 star. Good luck with your story. for me it's the end
I came here thinking it would be just another bad story like 75% here, how wrong I was! Author, I managed to raise the story to unimaginable levels after the first chapters.What happens in the plot really surprised me and the romance between Ayman and Kris was also really tempting HeeheeIn fact, I recommend it and can only ask for more.
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Good, good, good!For heaven's sake translate it already damn. Almost a year waiting for updates.Favorite work by IET after Coiling dragon.
Quite excited as I’m a big fan of AGM and the ratings for this are super high on Qidian. Hope it fufills my expectations, but the name is pretty similar to the Legend of Lingtian.
When I first started this novel I really liked the premise and all so I actually bothered reading the raws and let me tell you it only gets worse. Every single arc in this whole goddamn novel is exactly the same. First someone offends Mc, Mc hits back, the situation escalates and Mc is forced to flee by some sect elders. He then gets some random ass power up and proceeds to wreck the sect. And out of the rubble walks the next random dude who offends the Mc. This wouldnt be that bad if the characters and the story were interesting, but no. Every single Person in this world has exactly one of three character types: the benevolent friend, the useless fodder and the literally braindead genius/op sect elder. And to make things worse, the author hasn’t succeeded to include one good female character in all of the 2000 chapters. They either fall in love with the Mc or are bat**** crazy. I cant remember one sane female that wasnt on the mc d*ck. As for the overarching story, the thing that I initially thought was this novels strongest point, well, the author decided to retcon it all halfway through and then proceeded to completely ignoring all that was interesting and mysterious in the beginning for “muh we literally gods now”the translation quality is good tho, a shame the novel is not up to par
It's a mess. It's a hodgepodge of ideas from different stories connected through the idea of a house mutating. Or a system connected to a house. By chapter 20 something, it's a system with personality novel and the house is sidelined as a resource. This story doesn't know what it wants to be.At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly.It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.