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Hmm, it starts off a bit confusing as the MC is 10,000 years from the future or the past..... either way, starts off with our reincarnated MC being trash. There is the usual storyline, nothing too interesting, but not overbearing.
It's an amazing book, even tho there' are flaws in writing, it is an amazing book. Every chapter makes me want to read it more and more! Keep up with the good work and I am the biggest fan!
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Hahahah that was a fun read ngl. just sad it was discontinued
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I got bored idk why. I always yawn while reading this book. I'm quite surprised that the mc is naive at chapter 160+. Fucking dumbass and a hypocrite of a mc. And his "girlfriend" died and he is still the same.
It is pretty good,the grammar isn't the best but I just try to over look that and when I do you story is pretty good,the characters are alright and the MC has a good personality. MC is a little stupid at times but that is bound to happen because he is just a kid. All and all not to bad of a story.
Ah yes, the infamous Zap and Medusa.I don't know how I got hooked on your novel this easily. Prob because I play League. Take my five stars. Damn you.Jokes aside, I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel. Real thoughts, fluid conversations, toxic adcs... Everything feels so real. There's nothing to criticize for me.Patiently waiting for new updates.
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Extremely repetitive writing. Half of the paragraphs just reword previous paragraphs (e.g. "He was nervous because it was his first time." "Because it was his first time, he was anxious." and a handful of other rephrasings...some one right after the other). Then the author uses A LOT of extra unnecessary descriptions for movement. It feels like he says, "He turned his body, lifted up his arm, extended his fist, and pointed at the object with his index finger," instead of just saying, "He pointed at the object." It feels like 50% of the chapters could be erased with zero clarity lost...in fact it would increase clarity.Characters are one dimensional and boring.Barely any MEANINGFUL world background or description. Especially bad since the author seems to randomly use four different ranking systems terms for monster strength with no rhyme nor reason (stage, level, star, and rank).
Wow! This one is awesome! So far so good with the few chapters available. I hope it will progress brilliantly later in the upcoming chapters!