I love this novel, but romance side is verryyyy low, like 210 chapters and they had only a kiss…but friendships and the plot twist is very interesting!
This is a great book and I hope more people will read it as it had a lot of detail and is a great story
This novel is hilarious. It makes me wait eagerly for the next chapter. I'm curious about what the author will reveal each time. Amazing job.
I’m Definitely giving this book a Five Star,I was reading the chapter one but had to quickly come to rate it….I love this book so much,well…lemme continue reading hehe ??
Great writing quality, just needs a bit more work on the world background. But still, very nice updating stability but go to sleep for once. By the way, perhaps you'll need a proof-reader~
k how do I say it?? I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itmyou have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.
Hmm, the writing could be better and the characters lack in depth characterization. The pacing is fast, and the MC is rather evil. Ignoring my personal opinion on MC, my issue is the psychology state of the villain. Someone that broken would not be able to safely transition to another world and accept a new family, because they are incapable of trust. A more logical conclusion would have been killing his new family. My suggestion is ground your character more, this will make them more realistic and more terrifying.
welcome back author hope you update ??????????????
Translation is well written.world background is Good but it's going to be a face slapping Novel.I personally didn't like it MC have cheat which help him cultivate faster.Typical enemy and young master.
This really heavily reminds me of an anime which ig the author is going for and its nice to see that. The story is cute and I can see in my mind how it unfolds! The characters are also adorable! There are grammarical mistake and switches between past and present tense, author should settle for one tense. I also think its not really necessary to describe their appearances, we need a bit info about them but going too much into detail is superfluous. I get it tries to go with the anime trope but in a novel or even a light novel, its not really common (correct me tho if im wrong)This would make a good manga tbh! It would be even cooler if it could be a shounen, if you think managing idols and shounen doesnt fit, i highly recommend act age where the mangaka makes striving to become an actress so damn hype.Have you read light novels? I'd suggest looking at them to see how those authors wrote them, although a lot say japanese light novels are trash lolAll in all, its a nice, light-hearted story and I hope the author will continue their hard work!
I really liked the plot of the story it is comical and refreshing.The author has good pacing for this story and the world build-up is also nice. I really liked the bulb line though. hope you continue to publish the book ???
It's a great story with intresting and unique plot. I really liked it. Writing style is very clean without any errors which made readers to continue reading. The plot will surely make readers enjoy reading it and waiting for more. Good luck author??