Quiet good exactly. There are some loopholes or a part what i don't like example starter pack these are what will help you surrive but author skip it like nothing important.
but i can't handle this kind of story. i will mostly flip the table. His naivety is too much.
all i will say is "its super duper good"
I've seen that u are trying something new. Keep up the pace. Your book is a hidden gem.
I havent read it yet, though im slightly disappointed on the first football novel. But I saw author improving since then :) . I'll give the 2nd football novel a chance kekeke. Fighting author!
Made this account since I saw a promo for this book XD I like it but I’d like it more if chapters were uploaded every day
Bruh Dragons in this Novel talk about balance but then kill for no reason other then their hurt pride thousands of years ago?u200d♂️??????????
While I do like the story..it's feels like it was made for kids..the time spent describing the event that happen in the Mac's school is way more than the dedication the time actually spent on improving the story development wise..i feel like whatever happened since Chapter 1-69 has no bearing on the story and it's something that can just be said in passing. I have only read up until this point but don't really feel the excited to continue.While it's sometimes exciting, you are immediately doused with water after 2 or 3 chapters
My novel is full of mistakes so pls don't expect to much I am still trying to learn more.spelling and grammar even the words that I will use is still imature so have patient I am improving my skills.
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Exciting and mysterious.The novel could only be described with these two words.Although only two chapters have been uploaded, but they still couldn't hide the potential this work holds..Waiting for more updates.
The story is pretty cool. If I had to point out one problem, it would be the fact that the dialogue between the characters are a lil bit forced, but it's alright... also please give more updates the cliffhangers are literally causing me immense mental, physical, and astral pain.
Just bad and boring, loss of time, I don't recommend at all. Everything is confusing or stupid, nothing about the rank or even the world is explained nothing to keep