NagitoKomaeda8093
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.
A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah
you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now
like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something
all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid
I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all
it's not perfect English but it's readable
so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book
the mc is genuinely so annoying
There’s all ways the three calamity’s by the same author as authors pov. And maybe I will kill the author though it’s good but very unpolished
Story is overrated. So many cliches in the first 5 chapters. Its like reading same old novel stories. Not so different from the thousands of stories out there. So boring to read. Bad pick
Ify that's why I really refuse reading some novels that still has too many untranslated chapters because I wiill only get irritated once I caught up to the latest release, but sometimes I also can't help but jump into the trap with 2 reasons and that is, there's nothing to read and the story is good
The only thing I could say is, the narration is like a bolt of lightning. Way too fast and direct, more like an essay rather than a story. In my case, I could barely feel the atmosphere. The situation is throwing you here and there. Less emotions, not that engaging. Maybe, I've been fed up by typical Chinese writing, but this novel's writinh is way too bland.There are plot holes too, but it is common in this genre but the method of narration is really..
LinChe's mother is in M Nation, why haven't she received any news regarding Che's abduction?, story os nice but sure with loopholes. anyhoo.i will still continue favoring this story
Since I was a shameless author. I'll rate it in flying colors xD.
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peace out and enjoy (☆▽☆)
The story just began but I feel there’s potential there’s no predicting what will be next, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter it has my interest and I love the authors first book so I think I am going to love this one too
pretty good novel so far but author please re-write the chapters and use grammarly.. there are so many mistakes and the kind of mistakes that if you use even the free version of grammarly it will fix most mistakes.. or maybe even get an editor even though it costs it would be worth it as many will stop reading if the quality doesn't rise
This novel presents a very poor use of the English language, and the power levels and different rankings are ten times worse. However, the novel stands out with a unique and exceptional protagonist. He is incredibly intelligent and lacks empathy for others as long as it benefits him. He will go beyond all limits to obtain what he desires, showing no concern for others and sacrificing millions of lives as if they mean nothing. His journey towards immortality seems to be solitary, without even friends or someone he can trust, even a little. Despite these negative aspects, the novel is remarkably wonderful and enjoyable to read, and I highly recommend it to experience a truly unique story.
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