His novel is good if you want good character building, pretty solid plot, and good writing. On the other hand though, it gets tiring due to all the shenanigans happening to the MC to the point that it just gets REALLY tiring. Author wrote that the novel would focus more on the romance but God, where is it? It's taking WAY TOO long that interest just fades away. I'm gonna be dropping this unfortunately. May come back when some actual progress is happening. But seriously, there's way too much filler and unnecessary moments that it's making me lose interest.Writing style and plot is amazing, but it takes too long. I wouldn't be surprised if actual romance happens around 700 chapters.Anyway I'll be dropping this and maybe come back in the future and hopefully, by then, the tags are actually being true to itself.
I'm baffled by Webnovel decision regarding Gravity Tale's novels. If they closed that site why not dump all the contents at once? They've done this way with other novels they 'aqcuired' the translation from other sites. This way new reader would have to wait for years to read it. Or he can go directly to the 'Just a Translator' original site and read it all for free. (Just serch for it if you are curious.)
I actually like the novel, so continue writing as long as you can. Dont drop halfway, there are so many novels that are left halfway on wattpad. I created an account just to post a review here.
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This is good and light story and the development of story is also getting better day by day. I like both the characters specially Dylan. Keep going
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
Am I the only one spooked by the synopsis? I haven't read it yet but I'm seriously spooked right now. The author has no control over the characters and plot development? The heck? He is just a spectator?! So like everything is real. I don't know why am trembling right now. Am I scared or am I excited? I don't know. There's only one way to find out... let's read this! I hope I don't regret this
Unrealistic setting. Knock off Truman Show. Sleeper...................................................................................................
I was expecting a villain but it's portraying a character that's mis understood, if we take the transmigaration of soul apart. The protagonists are not suppose to be that mindlessly arrogant? It's just another story of a ML lead earning profits and collecting girls for his Harem. I don't see a villain there, the discription doesn't match the story except the system. Not for me i guess.
I dont think the chapters were proofread after like the first few dozen.It is annoying how they put the signature at the end of each chapter but don't actually proofread.
This is a pretty good story. Is it perfect. No. Not even close. In fact it has quite a few. It is really, really long, and really, really slow. It takes a while for anything to happen, and at times, its writing would go all over the place early on, but. And this is a big but. This is still a really good story. I usually try to read the first 15 chapters before I judge a story. A good thing since this one starts off kind of janky early on. But it gets better, Every chapter it got better, and better. The charcters are good too. They started off as just these mega cliques but the more it progressed the more I began to like them. This isn't a great story, but it is a fun story.
Starts out nice with interesting kind of story.... but later on, mc just feels like plot device... probably because of writing....like...he has no personality or even a belief of his doings no goals no passions just doing his things and he'd be like "did it".There are many characters but they don't speak character. No actual events as I can see.. Basically I got bored because it's boring even my excitement got wacked down.