Read 20 chaoters : The premise and concept of this novel is good and well written. The only thing I can't accept is the author's blatant use of words which are contradictory.1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.?. Does this mean they are doing some adult stuff playing ?? They should compete with each other to check their progress as Belle is too competitive as said by author but nope they play around.2) Dragon in this world lays very small eggs and two dragons come out of a single egg as they are twin and they simply bond with each of the MC and Belle.THICC Plot armor.3) The author does not know about cause and effect. He writes whatever he wishes and events happens without any cause and consequences.4) Nobody wanna kill/harm/kidnap MC. Only the dark alliance wants it and rest all wanna worship mc as god.5)He is as mature as a youngster but cant say no to Belle cause his Body is still a KID.6) Everything happens in favor of mc (THICC PLOT ARMOR).He is a happy go lucky naive kiddo with maturity.I hate reading story where everything is smoothsailing for mc who is naive idiotic but author keeps portraying him as intelligent and mature. This makes the story a FAIRY TALE and I have grown up from Fairy Tales.There is no suspense and thrill in reading fairytales. So If you like Fairytales this novel is for you. Alas its not for me.
Buena historia, me gusta me el sistema y su funcionamiento...............,..................................,............................................................................Todos estos puntos son porque debo de poner la cantidad mínima de ciento cuarenta caracteres
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Overall this was a pleasant read for a change. I can't comment on translation accurate but it was nice for the gender pronouns to be correct!Ignoring the system itself the main character has to get stronger through cultivation. His real game cheat is simply the ability to acquire cultivation technique pieces(can be made into a whole) and then fusing them.He's extremely cowardly which makes it rather hilarious if not slower paced. He also doesn't realizes how much he has derailed the world through his own actions. It's the most fun I've had with a novel in quite some time.Unfortunately you rarely see gems like this chosen. I really do hope it doesn't fall into obscurity. I would love to keep up with this novel especially given how much effort seems to be put into the novel's editing.
The nationalism in this novel is extremely irritating, every chapter the author has to praise his country once or twiceThe nationalism in this novel is extremely irritating, every chapter the author has to praise his country once or twice
The mc is way too dumb for me. all the desicions he makes are so stupid that it makes me want to strangle him. Read to find out if you like it or not just my opinion.
It starts off great but once you get past the free chapters it's all China is the best and the rest of the world is racist.
This novel started strong. While there were some parts I feel could have been explored a bit more, pacing was fine too. however, when the author started to copypaste half of previous chapters, continuity and readability broke.
Interesting plot with a very engaging action I love this kudos author
It's alright... Depends on the topics you like...Overall the story is fine, but then again, I can be picky. Story for me confused, but I read on.
The cultivation in this novel follows the standard. Qi Gathering > Foundation Establishment > Ardorous Gold Core > Nascent Soul Stage > Immortal/deity. The protagonist reincarnated into the world from earth and spends hundreds of years cultivating to the core stage and then dying. He finds himself with a system but 'dead'. He uses his system to lead his clan to greatness. Good novel please support it.
Been looKing for evil ruthless mc for While. This Is what am looking for give no p00p about girl.Mc can do everything and anything to reach his goal, thats nice.