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Read till Chapter 126.The writer has a good hold of his writing style, and is very consistent overall. I like the story progression and generic motivation behind the MC. However, there is a glaring plot hole that is not covered at all. There is absolutely no mention of edged weapons at all in the academy time, but it was mentioned during 1st mission. This implies that they exist in this world. MC or his friends never encountered swords or other weapons when MC said that the land expansion of humans using gunpowder weapons was in stalemate. With the world low on technology, but still very much developed, it seems weapon forging would have been a great boon to humanity.Making this a complete martial arts novel is cool. Depending solely on flesh and bones to survive and excel without armor and weapons is a very good concept, but projectiles should be included. Humans created shields and bows of wood before metal, and it is established that trees are plentiful in this world. Cultivation without any energy to depend upon is very challenging and I commend the author to make it this detailed. Maybe they introduce it later on. They are already hinting at lightning, wind attributes, and whatnot, and if they do introduce energy/mana/qi I am curious as to how they incorporate it into a story without much foreshadowing. Overall at this point, I am bored of highly detailed martial art and want some exciting flexs instead of reasonable disapointment.
Is there going to be harem or no? thank u.
Please update this series to audio like others please!!!
253 chapters 9/26/23
when is the next update?
This author has written themselves into a psychotic rabbit hole and has no clue on how to get out. Stella‘a characterization is so disappointing. The author does not deal with Stella issues with her family. Nor has she reveal Zack’ parentage. Each time she throws more chaos at the readers. Please do
I really like the story
A great read. so many ups and downs and twists and turns. Love getting to know all the characters throughout the series. can't wait for the next one
Fantastically written as always! I have yet to read a book of hers that I didn’t fall in love with!
Book is just so so...
I have read the last 4 book and I most admit that you're a great writer. I've enjoyed all of them, looking forward to reading them over again! .... keep them coming and hope to read some more of your in the future!
Loved this book it was written very well and made you love the characters even more absolutely love the Alliance members and I even love Greg
