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You are not smart enough to read this!If you take machine translation to the extreme opposite side, this is what you would get. What I'm saying is that rather than too little English, there is far too much! You'll need a dictionary or thesaurus handy for the large words and transliteration. Be ready to experience "the abortion of a rainbow
While yes the story has potential i cannot get any more from the story itself because of the chapter locks after chapter 18 causing me to really question why the auther did so and I am very mad for that reason as most chapter locks are at chapter 40+
As far as i read the book, its really interesting and hook me up for reading next chapter.It's well written about mutants.I LIKE NIX CHARACTER, STRONG and POWERFUL.KEEP IT UP GOOD WORK AUTHOR
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Hello, review time. first of all i usually writte review, if i writte one, between 50-150 chapters not so early, but as i read authors notice of it will help hus story i will do so. as this story should have attention of readers, at least those who love football.so, i do in seriousness:writting quality: 5* - even if you can find there some grammar wrongdoings, they are so little or not so important that you will have any problem to understand story or it will not annoy you in any way. author even stopped using weeks to his aging, and puting only age there, so there are no more confusion, so i dont find needs to lower rating there..Story development: 5* story is focused on football, which i consider right thing to do, mean there arent to many neccesary part pf story which would be usseless a little of slice of life there is is fine as its in good chemistry with the football part of story. even his girlfriend (not officialy yet) and his mon has some show up but not to much that it would postpone the story, which i find with great appreciation, so its all good. only note which i find a bit a pity is, POV of others persons. what i mean, for example commentator of matches are done well and trainers too, occasionaly spectators too, that is all well. but to side story for example there is mentioned clubs like chealsea, barca, real are curious about MC, well if its true, why not put some managers talk out there, or some club happening in backstage out of Izan knowing it, well just thats is my feeling, but overall story is developing in fine and good way, so thumbs up. btw you can even see author, how he is getting better, mb not in each chapter but when you see start of story and see ch.20+ for example i can see the developement of author himself (positively) well next..Character design: 5*. Izan is good boy for me, he, he isnt stupid, but clever. but now what i found somehow surprised author put that he is good in study which i am surprised, not that those who do atletics ar edimb but doing top of class is rlly rare. but i dont mind it, as he as character rlly do things as smartass, he rlly upping his stats in overall way which is not bad to do, just i already mentioned in some comments, he should also focus on some stat where he will be original and one of the best in team, for example 30 percent of his point to give always to this stat (passing, dribling, avaranes whatever choosen) and 70 percent giving to his overall grow up, but thats just how i feel he should do, i am not author so whatever :D you will rlly like Izan anyway.other characters, well i think they are put there, and i dont feel like they have to small time of show up, by me its in optimal way. next up..updating stability: for now i will give 5*, story is new and is updated rlly well i just hope author will keep it up a d dont drop it..world background: 4* true be told, apart that its mentioned its post messi and ronaldo era, we dont know anything about happenings in the world at all, not that we need it right now, but i cant give full rate here, as there were a lot of great guys in football, and we dont even know if we see them in story as of now, even as a managers for example, Pavel Nedvěd, star of Lazio, after Juventus who went do job for his club as manager in Juventus, i know i mention someone from my country but i put it as example, but story is in early stage mb we will see Manager Messi, Ronaldo, Cole or others in it in future. who know :D so thats only stat where i lower rating for story..Overall story is great and even if author go premium, i plan to read it, and in my clear conscience i can recomend this story for reading. i personaly when i have 3 power stones rdy i always give 1 to this story alongside two others i rlly like to read curently.So thanks Author for your work, for story you showing up, and pleas dont drop it.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
For those who have read a little and droped because of the slow paced and descriptive beginning.... ANDthose who are peeping here to see what it is about. (Sorry... no spoiler from me xD) Its is slow and careful like Game of Thrones. If you take a closer look, the work is well made and quite beautiful. The introduction is not overly detailed, as I'm my opinion it would lay bare everything in one go, and that would kill the triller of uncovering the mysterious ambient created by the wording. So. Try and accompany a little more and if the story itself is not to your liking, feel free to drop. But it actually deserves a go. ?I'm not really good with detailed descriptions, but. Those were my feelings in relation to this novel. Give it a try. At least you won't miss the chance if it happens to be the kind of story you like.
Yeah just wanted to say I’m enjoying the book.I like how the story is developing and I want to see what Kairen’s power is :)Thank you author, keep it up!
The story is interesting and enjoyable. The way the characters are portrayed makes it easier to understand them, especially their feelings and the line of thoughts.Although the story seems a little fast paced at the start it is still good.Writing quality is pretty good too. The choice of words to describe things makes the story more enjoyable.Overall 4.8
So far it is a great novel and very promising, I really like how the character is going, I hope that the author continues and has more chapters or else ... !!!! I do not care about the consequences, I am crazy hahaha hahaha hahaha! !!! ? ? ??