So, if ur like me these reviews don’t mean anything to you, but seriously this novel is incredible, it’s hard to think of a comparison, but it’s the same sort of genre as vampire system or other novels like that. The world building is quite nice, the writing quality has been impeccable, I find myself never hating any character, with character development definitely present. Most importantly, though towards the start there are a lot of time lapses, it’s done in such a way that it never starts to drag on, it skips most of the mind numbingly boring, 30+ chapter school life filler, and focuses on major events. All in all, it is really good, and I’m trying to think of a way to get others to read this lol... I’d just say this is an incredible novel, plz try it out.
The story seems kind of good, but you have butchered it with the poor grammar. Sometimes I dont exactly know what I'm reading. The world background was kinda ok.
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