Clamiral_del_eau
This story actually includes everything in the title. The MC and all subsequent interactions fill the bill. I continue to look forward to reading each chapter.
THIS IS AWESOME DUDE! CONTINUE THE STORY!!........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................UNTIL THE END!!
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Author here! Another shameless review ;)Hopefully I can live up to my own set of high expectations. I would love to write more and will continue to work on this novel arduously. I also have another novel that I will be posting updates for on my Pateorn account. It is about half way done.https://***.patreon.com/kalrock
Amazing plot! It definitely gets better! It's the perfect combination of mystery and comedy.Also, LOVE THE NEW COVER!! ? it's nice to finally put a face to my beloved (and creepy) characters ?
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please won't you update anymoor have you dropped it
The story has a very keen eye to details which appreciated. I read this story with ease as there was no detectable grammatical errors or anything. It's very sensual and hot! The writer cleverly uses words to describe things/tools without just stating it. You have to use your imagination, which is far better. You have to check this story out!
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The series of short chapters is still unveiling the characters and the plot. I have yet to see the buildup to climax. The other characters appears to be undeveloped yet but the others are still maxing.
To many POV
Congratulations Author on this piece of work. I rarely read sci books but am glad to read your work. You put a lot of work in the world building and I love the story development. Cheers and keep writing.
