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Can't say anything about it. Since it seems to be incomplete here? So if someone has the raw it would be nice so that we can actually take a look at how it is.
such a well writen novel, this is a must read! i hope the Author will finish the novel, and the continuation of this one ?
super well written novel. I enjoyed reading it until he got to college ....and thats when the plot got kinda strange...however my advice to the author is to make the main character more consistent (which would improve the progression of the plot significantly). Your MC dabbles in too many things and then abandons them, and he is a little too perfect. Plus there are some major plotholes pushing the plot just to show off the MC's perfect skills and Gary-Stuness. Take the time to develop his decision making and the thinking that goes into his actions. After reading for awhile i found the MC behaving like a drastically different person every chapter as if he has a split personality disorder. Please to slow down and justify the MC's actions, things happen too fast and for no reason other than his justice-boner. Let the MC enjoy his newfound freedom, I don't understand why you would make him basically return to his old profession when he has limitless potential. Overall this is down to a matter of taste, but to other readers i really do recommend you read this novel as it is significantly better than most novels you find on this site and has plot elements for everyone.
Well I say it a pretty good chapter. But the game menus seem a bit over complicated. All in all a good start in how he will fight in the game, I think it was very fine.
I love the story, the writing quality is top notch and its very very addictive like super addictive, and the character design, the detailed battle, the story line every thing is just excellent
It's a good novel with a good scenario, so much space for growth! Don't have a perfect gramatic, but... who am i to have been disapointed by this heheh.Hope this job continues better!
first of harem i am fan but i am not a fan of anthro anywaydo we still need beast taming novels isn't that seemingly more in this site why add this cause it doesn't look like its gonna give ua something fresh ?
A very fun read, ive already spent half the morning reading all 60 chapters in one sitting. Everything so far has been A+; From character development to the details of the world and the battle sequences. Lots of humour, but at the same time moments are very serious and chill inducing. Cant wait to read more of this novel!
overall this is the book that is readable in this batch
Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right? surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not....Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them. As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem)...Take care guys and be safe.peace;
Why doesn't Long Hochen become the God of Creation at the end of the series? The useless veritable Tang Jia San Shao know that the Throne of Seal story line is boring