What is your point lmao?
Why are you writing things l.i.k.e.t.h.i.s. with periods between letters? this is why I have a hard time reading LN's and WN's until they're professionally done. same issue I have with leaving Japanese words or putting things in [brackets] for no reason. I'm just saying.
Nice book. You need to go back and check spelling, but other than that, the story is good.
Looking good so far. Waiting for more chapters.
The synopsis sounds familiar... Is it similar to a xianxia novel "Eternal life begin with taking a wife"???
Bro, I was reading this on a whim, but when I started, I couldn't stop, so please don't stop either
This will be my Q&A about the novel. Feel free to ask anything.
If possible I would like to give it 5 stars for comedy. Story development has room for improvement but this comedy old!?
Not really the type of books I normally read but this one is different, makes me want to explore and know more about the book. Good job author ✨✨
Author, plz dont drop this novel. It has a very good potential, and you just need to reach for it. We are all eagerly supporting your novel and patiently awaiting your next entry....
The Actual Criminal Who Is Commiting Crimes While Jon Is Currently Occupying Hundreds Of Police All On His Own (Actually Having 100+ Police Him In A Place Like NY Sounds Crazy btw) :
Not sure what's going on with some of these reviews. This story is bad. I mean it might be better than most of this batch of stories, but that's not exactly a high bar. It's almost written like it is supposed to be a parody of some system novels the problem is the jokes just don't land that well and are just kind of eh. The MC is kind of meh as well. The system is just terrible.