nice one. although not the best it's still better than many others.
Hello everyone! I hope you like my new novel and enjoy reading it so far.Let me know how you feel about the pace so far and any feedback is highly appreciated!Best regard's UndeadSoulUltra.
Lovely piece of work. I love Chapter two. It was a sparked up my curiosity. Well let’s see how it goes. I’ll leave another review later after reading more
Hello author! I'm interested in starting to read the novel, but first I would like you to ask me a few questions, please, my questions are as follows: who are the members of the MC's harem (if you can please say their names) and if there will be ntr (I hope not)... please answer me
Honestly speaking I’d wanna be glazed and explained by the author, his attention to detail and creativity are out of this world, W book
The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.
"Bye desu."
All of class was silenced for a moment.
" Hmph...then I'm going to kill him. " Gaia said
"Well, come then."
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And all that glitters is gold