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The first chapiter is well done and well written just wait to sée the next chapiters they will be great the story is on the way si continue liking and reading ??
Best Novel I had read. You all should read it if you like this type of novel. Love IT
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Fox here! and this is my totally unbiased review of this marvelous piece of work. I'll be focusing on two main points: story setting and character development. In terms of story setting, this is a spellbinding novel that follows the lives of four unlikely individuals, brought together by a royal contest to protect a princess.Each of the four competitors had a unique and complex backstory, and the author skillfully wove their stories together, creating a tapestry of action, adventure, and drama. The Princess is a distant figure, in the beginning of the story so far...which I'm not sure I like very much but her influence was felt throughout the story. The book is complex and intriguing, drawing readers in with its intricate plot and memorable characters. This book is a fascinating and unforgettable read, and it leaves readers eager to meet Thesra and learn more about her character.Character developmentThe characters seem very diverse and unique or at least let's say real! The four MC's for now: a so called traitor's son; Leomere. A dark man who is not as evil as he seems; Joz. A female warrior disguised as a man; moheazta(can't spell her name right lol). And a young prodigy with dangerous powers; Parele. The author has created a world that is familiar and strange and the characters are complex and multidimensional. It is a book that'll keep you hooked to your screen the whole day and keep you wanting more. Good job author! A very great upcoming book. I'm definitely following till the very end!Fox was here!
I liked it. Want to see more of this story.This the first time I was happy to read this story! Thank you for the good story.We all support you hope we can read more stories like this in coming days Which you a good luck hope we can enjoy reading your stories
Excellent story, great world building and Op character development.
I've read quite a few books with the same premise, but I have to say this one might be one of the best. I really like the game elements. I look forward to reading more chapters. It's definitely worth spending money on.
I created this cover for your story and tried to make it as cool as possible. I really hope you like it—let me know what you think, and keep your good work
This story has a lot of cliches. The mc who is constantly and incessantly bullied, and treated like POW in a vietnamese camp. The Mc who is shunned by everyone, even at some point including his parents. Potential female love interest, wielding Ice Powers. Cute little sister. Stupid young masters. As of chapter 151 Mc has not gotten revenge on the people who bullied and tortured him, the only thing close was simply punching someone inconsequential character in the face to prove that he had awakened power. I wouldn't say the novel is too bad, I only read until 151 because I thought his power was interesting and I also enjoyed the multiple power systems present throughout the world. I wouldn't say I was bored, it certainly kept me occupied and entertained for a bit, but it failed to draw me in, in any meaningful way. So sadly chapter 151 is where I drop, I think people should give it a go it might draw them in, but now me.
