love the book so much. waiting for more updates. I hope Corey will give Ethan more hard time but please don't make him date that Lil di*k Jacob. he is out of the league
Please fix chapter 157. It is now repeating over and over and over. Can’t get past this chapter. What is wrong with this book??
This book is so bad I wouldn’t recommend it. Bad story, bad writing, bad English grammar. On top of it all is the antiquated and misogynistic concepts. Waste of time to read.
The dialogue in this book is sharp and each character has a distinct voice. The fortune-telling auntie is the best—'Child, you have a naturally destined life of great wealth and honor.' She says it so matter-of-factly, like she's reading the weather. And then when Jiang Lai says 'Auntie, did you mistake me for someone else?' the auntie doesn't even argue, just smiles and says 'That classmate of yours has a fortune that came midway through life, but you were born with wealth.' That's the kind of line that stays with you. The neighbor aunties are written as a Greek chorus of gossip—'Your dad's situation… I heard about it. You poor child, why is your life so hard?'—but the System's responses to their dialogue are the real punchline. Every sympathetic comment triggers a payment. It's darkly comedic. Jiang Lai's internal voice is also great: 'What kind of single-player system is this? So unintelligent.' That's a teenager talking, not a narrator. And the line 'it took her exactly 0 seconds to accept this clueless system' is so dry and perfect. The mother-daughter dialogue is quieter but no less effective. 'Mom, I've thought it over. I've decided to change my surname to yours.' No drama, just a statement. And Jiang Shan's response—'You've grown up and can make your own decisions. Mom supports you.'—is exactly what a tired but loving mother would say. The dialogue never feels like it's explaining the plot to the reader.
As a form of therapy everyone has a right to write the weather is about rape or whatever form of abuse they have so whoever wants to report this this is ridiculous they can write that’s why writing is a form of therapy and it’s wonderful I cannot finish reading it I haven’t even started I left it of
Love the book! Hope you will be updating soon!
Really good read. Has some funny parts and some sad bits. 'Watermelon Tits'
Enjoyed it from the beginning
This book is interesting and grabs attention from the first chapter! I am loving your book??
nice story
amazing writing as always...so much fun reading every single chapter..one of my favorite author ever..love ya
Where’s the rest of the story? It just stopped!