Ravenwrites
Pretty fun read. The beginning was especially fun, and seeing the Mc grow more and more insane is a real treat. Now his ability is a little cliche but I think it's fine.
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Really great book and one of my all time favorite.writing is really good and i rarely saw any Grammar mistakes, characters are well developed and the world is detailed. I must say it's really sad to see storys like this getting dropped and I still hope one day i will wake up and my phone gives me the notification "How to be a succubus released chapter 102".
Ok seriously, am not that good in English but come on, How do you even understand this. it's like reading chinese and all you know is 'ni hao'.
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I really quite like this novel. It doesn't take itself entirely seriously, and the system he has allows for the author to get him into contrived and funny scenes that bely common sense (because the system has none). So far it's developed quite well, and fleshes out the world background so that you have a good picture of the past, present, and a hazy view of the future. It's fairly exciting, with battle-scenes that aren't just "He punched him, he fell over" sort of style, and has a decent dialogue along with extreme characters with interesting behaviours and viewpoints.
This novel seems a face slapping novel with a few killings if needed. The mc tries to act as elegant and cool as much as possible, leaving those who have tried to kill him alone while trying to act cool slapping their faces and only will he try to kill someone if the plot requires it. Although the mc is ruthless and dominating, unfortunately, he's literally the type of a carefree old monster who doesn't end all troubles immediately but instead will let the troubles come to him. He wasn't the typical ruthless mc like from 'The Man in Hell' which would start a massacre. So, his ruthlessness is okay but not enough to be called brutal to cruelty like the mc in 'The Man in Hell'.Overall, the novel is good especially if there's smut in this in the future. What I only don't like is that there's absolutely little to none killings in 60 chapters. What died is just a random character like servants which is truly ridiculous in the 60 chapters. So I believe this novel will have thousands of chapters due to how slow the story is.
Why did you stop writing dude. the Concept is pretty Interesting and the characters reactions are pretty nice. its kinda funny and idk man its a pretty great novel. i hope you start writing again. Anyways i dont know what else to say so imma just type till it lets me post it
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There a minor typos that I can get over, but overall love the character development, the story line, and just how good every chapter was from then on. I loved it in shorter terms. I'm going to go read book 2 now.
Great. V.
So far the story is good and Translation is great,keep up the great work ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
