First review to be mine I guess? So basically, I'm rewriting this story with new updates, and I hope you all will support me. Coming to the plot, it is a story that revolves around three generations, their incarnations in order to complete their responsibilities, their love seeking another chance to bloom, in the sunlight this time.For instance, if you one day wake up with all the memories of your past life, the misery of your death, and the revenge your soul craves for, what would happen?!The story revolves around the journey to the past from present, to the beginning of everything that lead to the present! Everything, connected with each other!! I would like you all to show your precious interest on reading this book cause I believe I won't be disappointing you guys. Long story, needs your patience!! Worthy story, demands your interest!!
First novel I read in here and I'm hooked, it's really great, especially because despite technically being a romance, there is not much of that and I like that, I really enjoy Natasha. My favorite character was her, until, Chaos! Chaos is absolutely the best one, I find his scenes with whoever the most entertaining, and Natasha blooms in her interactions with him. And it's not just because I'm a cat person. Can't wait for her to take her revenge to the next level!
Better than average, far from masterpiece.Plot and character development start OK, but seems to halt post ch. 100. Before this point MC had plan other than just get stronger. He tested thing, gathered information and made plans how he wanted to progress, but after chapter 100 there is non of it until ch. 167 which is last chapter at the time i am writing this. In those chapters MC just becomes observer in plot and goes with anything while opportunities to get stronger just shower him like no tomorrow without any contribution from himself. And any setbacks get resolved in mater of few chapters with MC getting stronger in process this ties up to...Another issue, tension, that just does not exist post separation with his mother. Since if only thing MC risk is his life in story like this, it is clear that he will survive otherwise there would be no book. That is why risk to other people / things he gets attached to is only real risk in stories like this (that are not like game of thrones where anyone can die) and that is only true if he actually loses something. That could have been done with his party during first dungeon if we didn't get dragon POV explaining that he actually didn't lose anything. Followed by his fox being at risk if it ever shows up again. But as it stands now there are no risk.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Support, I just hope there won't be harem, I like this kind of story but will be destroyed once MC became strong and collect girls. Although I like harem too on certain plots but not this one.
The MC's power level are inconsistent, in the begining he was able to defeat a high level opponents, as he gains more levels and stats he was finding it harder to defeat his opponents, the author doesn't explain how the stats are related to the cultivation level, he was able to defeat some mid level opponents with his stats below 10, when his stats are 100+ he was having trouble with the same level of enemies
Something intriguing...it's like as if a bubble is about to burst . Would like more information about Luke and his background. Why does he consider himself unlucky . Nate is cool
i have to be honest here at some point the OP has to stop most novels have 1 thing, either1. they get reincarnated and use knowledge of the future2. they are an extreme expert on top of thator 1. they reincarnate and use specific rewards to build the most solid foundation2. get a super OP system or talent on top of thatthis is all of it combineddont get me wrong i enjoy this novelbut at some point it has to stopnow is not that point
You don't always find the things you like, and the things you don't like are spread like cockroaches, hard to crush and multiply quickly.You don't always find the things you like, and the things you don't like are spread like cockroaches, hard to crush and multiply quickly.
Definitely one of the better novels this week.Just like The Legendary Mechanic, the MC had played a VRMMORPG game that was globally popular. He was a plot finder and was well acquainted with hidden things.He was regressed to a few days prior to the games launch, and isekai'd into the body of a young noble in the VRMMO.He doesn't have a status screen or system so far, and his only cheats seem to be his knowledge. He can hand out quests to players. So far the plot says that his family is going to pretty much all die in a rebellion that has murky origins, so he has to find a way out of that. He's still young and there's a decade or so before the plot begins.It's alright so far, I was just hoping for a status screen similar to TLM.
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