I'm hooked, looking forward to more chapters?
i can tell the synopsis is very ai generated
it's a great read. the pacing is good and the story always leaves room to develop further. I would definitely pick this up when your between reads.
Just for being a story that actually stays true to its name, Unlike other story titles with 'immortal' in them , but the character never becomes or never is an immortal....
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I have nothing to say but three words, it's just art
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It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw up
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I think this has great potential, writing quality is not the best, but the story line and the character development is very realistic. I can't wait to see where this leads.
This story had promise. When I started reading this I expected somewhere along the lines of actual Mages training and honing on their respective realms and then eventually fuse or enhance the realms. The start of the novel was great up until the girl decided she wanted to tag along.I was fine with this to an extent until the author had to force the MC out of gaining experience from traveling in the wilderness. The author then inserted some stupid decisions that made some important figure help him on deaths door after a dumb conflict that could have been avoided. after that the MC just starting a training montage for a long time...again.What really made me quit this novel is when I realized after he went strolling through a city the whole story devolved into a ****ty xianxia novel With the retarded MC being overprotective of woman and angry noble sons because of MC interfering. I expected more but I guess I should not expect too much on this kind of site.The girl that tags along the MC just ruins the novel. The problem is not having a girl tag along. THE problem is how to author presented her. It's like the author is trying so hard to make her a ML but fails at it way too much.