This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.
Entire story suffering. Author only does three a week and then does fluff/filler nonsense. Story doesn't even have 100 chapters yet. Hope he figures it out soon.
I've never enjoyed a fanfic so much as I have enjoyed this one, the way the history is handled, the implementaion of lore that we don't really see in the movies, the WoW thing caught me by surprise but it was a welcome one (See what I did there? ?) and the book overall is great, it makes me wish for a VR Game like it so bloody much, the release schedule is a bit weird and leaves much to be desired but I, as a writer understand it cus' I do the same, props to you author!
? Thug LIFEI don't know what the author thinks, this story is very strange and excessive. MC seems weak with bleach system. What's more this is plagiarism and I hate that. I hope all readers report this content abuse. And I hope this novel will be deleted like some other fanfiction novels.? Thug LIFE
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Of writing this I'm at chapter 110 so far I'm enjoying the series but there's a few problems with the book. For starters is it's hard to tell if they really playing a game, people don't say the right things and finally their isn't a base of the game to give us a idea what is and what isn't capable
The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.
By far the best novel on this site. The plot is surprisingly interesting, riddled with meandering but welcome complexity that unravels over time.The characters too are multi layered with memorable personalities, which only serves to foster great empathy towards them and their cause from the reader. You can also detect social commentary on the xianxia genre when you read between the lines. I just wish the translation quality was better. This is seriously a shining gem in the sea of mediocrity and trash that encapsulates 99.9% of this site. Give it a read if you have an appreciation for thoughtful plotting, complex characters and terrific world building.
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It's a good if you want to take a break from all the dramatic and exaggerated Chinese fantasy novels, however my only problem is that for some reason the translation quality regresses with each chapter. At time it really irritates me when the translator dosen't even know the difference between has,have and had
Finally MC with Western name now i can remeber your goddann name. Im already waiting this so long since RTW. Finally finally i can remeber the character name easily
Story is really good, MC was a dragon in his previous life, now on earth he have to become stong again for revenge and move back to immortal world, the story has lot of potential, There's good r-18 contents( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) for man of culture.And the thing which i liked the most is the interaction between MC and his womens, you literally can feel there affection towards each other. Most of the time MC will hide is powers. For his future planning and family protection, and that's good thing.[There's many who might complain about it, but think logically]he 'WAS' strong in his previous life, and as a human he is definitely not stong enough[for now] to show his power to the world because he is not the only one who can cultivate. There's many weapons which can be used against him and his family. And i m sure if you are in his place you would have done the same thing, otherwise you will be dead by now, lol.Novel is progressing at good pace, i m really enjoying this, hope author continue this and won't drop it.