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since there is no comments if you reached this you have found a hidden treasure good luck brothers and sister.
Ohhhhh snaappp so that is his “real body” and Ling Yan is only a reflection of his self that he created !! Woooow now this is getting somewhere 😍😍 omg what a twist !! Thanks for explaining💕💕💕
He's literally retarded. What scheme? She/He know your Identity but you go to her/his place. She/He can do whatever he want. This bullshit nearly make me drop.
I'm around 200 mark and the one thing I want to say is that author stretch too much of every opponents bg and thinking and he even spiral down information hole to just build 1 or 2 chapter worth of info dump.
bro-con?
It is better to develop the country together and take it towards super power without spreading hatred between Hindus and Muslims
First Indian writer writing for Indian and I like it very much now everyone is loving it please write more we all support I am
Nice read look forward for moreNice read look forward for more
It was a fun read. It was slow in the beginning but I enjoyed it.
The writing quality needs little editing. Sometimes you write information which is of no use. Like I was confused who was speaking. Try to cut down few sentences.
Overall, I really liked the characters you introduced. I only read few chapters so I can’t comment but if I have time I’ll keep reading and then write full review.
All the best author.
Okay! As the author, I will give this one-star review because I want to. ????
Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! ?????
The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.