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Solange-san, who'd convulsed with wide eyes, was now appearing to have a carefree smiling face as she slept peacefully.
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I have enjoyed the soft, *punipuni* (squishy) sensation of being held between her thighs, but if I lose my focus, my 7th ejaculation would begin immediately.
Yet just before he arrived, he saw something that grealty shocked him. The Etherion had destroyed the tower.........Or that's what he first thought.
Andrés: this system will have to build clans, groups, guilds or parties? I'm going to try while I wait
Starts good enough and gets bad quickly. I don't know if the author just wants to pad the word count or what, but the pace drops off a cliff once you get further into the novel. It's like every single reference to any element of the world building requires a massive detour to explain all the details that will (99% of the time) hold little/no relevance to the story.Then, if you can imagine it, the pacing gets even worse. Imagine watching a movie where you pause it every 5 seconds and then take a few minutes to describe everything in the background like it is of utmost importance (when it isn't, it almost always isn't).Now imagine that what you are giving up to get that level of detail is plot consistency. The novel has a minefield of plot holes. It's like playing an RPG where you have an open quest log that is pages and pages long of unfinished quests that show no indication of ever getting completed.I managed to slog through 600 chapters, but there has been a fair bit of skimming these last couple hundred channels just to make it bearable. Author needs editor, badly.
Anyway after the bell rang I tried to distract myself because I knew it was a long time from four but I failed catastrophically so I told myself "screw it" and picked up the ramshackled piece of paper in my pocket and looked at it for like the millionth time, not that I needed to because it was basically memorised in my head but I didn't want anything to go wrong.
"Xelo!" Sigaw ni Esmeraldapati si Mauriss si Ella naman nagtago sa puno. Takot kasi ito sa paniki.
"Then lead the date!" He asked me to lead the date while wearing a childish smile.
[Unique Quest Received]
"This is what I wear normally." lied Izuku.
"Awww, what's wrong?" Ichigo asked in a mocking tone. "Did I upset the little girl by foiling her kidnapping and killing her friends?" Ichigo asked as he continued to mock the little girl on the line.
